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Abused

ABUSED I beat up a bottle of sprite the other day, No one complained They just said “oh what a shame” like bro that was lame Pick up a pad—let’s play a game It’s called puff puff pass The winner gets chemo and a transplant in the end and If you’re lucky— the bonus is you get to bury a friend Un-amused I said I’ll skip the puffing and pass I felt abused but alas I heard a bottle, cry out loud and in no doubt proud I saw a man strangle it Foaming at the tip, The man now guzzling it— Its insides were thrown into a pit I stood there helpless and ashamed and I’m not proud to say I witnessed a murder that day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/16/2014 4:12:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Chickumbutso- I choose your first good poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:12:00 PM
Hi Chickumbutso, I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/15/2014 2:34:00 PM
Chickumbutso, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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