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Abstractly Phenomenal Butterfly Thesis

She was an abstract woman in a clinical world theoretically reasoning her notions were perfectly discerning midst-chaotic sensibilities, whilst her inane whimsicality kept semblances of insanity eye-leveled twixt reconfigurable ideologies' over-share & objectionably designated delicacies of exothermic exposures pseudo-psychic phenomenons, therefrom she found divinities were misaligned with governmental expansions as an alternative to spirituality and hypotheses of butterfly hurricane frolics, 'twas indubitably manifestations of poetically piddled calculating escapism artistes & scoffing con-conspirators

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Date: 11/5/2016 12:26:00 AM
Where to begin... Haha. What little mind I have left is now blown out! Thanks for that. Haha.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/5/2016 6:52:00 AM
Glad you're laughing Rick! That's what I like to instigate, chaos! :)
Date: 11/4/2016 4:10:00 PM
A butterfly with a different minds design. Flying amist a world designed to contain such an abstract mind. love it. I relate. yeah!!!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/5/2016 6:56:00 AM
Oh butterflies and their force over nature, can be quite the paradox. Thanks Holly!
Date: 11/4/2016 4:03:00 PM
Yeah it's those exothermic exposures that always touch my heart, wild ride Paloma
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Paloma P
Date: 11/5/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thrilled it has, thanks John.
Date: 11/4/2016 3:15:00 PM
This is such a good example of exactly that what you are proving. Deliciously abstract and whimsical. I hope the misaligned divinities in the end found their right place in spirituality :)
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Paloma P
Date: 11/5/2016 6:54:00 AM
By Jove, you've got it, thanks Darren. :)
Date: 11/4/2016 1:27:00 PM
Huh??? Okay, this one wrapped itself around my brain stem and wouldn't let go, it's still there. But it is such a pleasurable feeling I think I'll leave it there a while, I think unless it is coercing me to say that, wait, did I just say that...huh? Abstract doesn't even begin to describe these thoughts but creative and amazing seems to fit perfectly. I just read the description below for Charlie...and once again I say...huh? Your talent blows me away Paloma
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 1:30:00 PM
I thought that was the mental scruff of your neck Chris, sorry! :) Thanks so much, I love reading your reviews my poetic friend.
Date: 11/4/2016 12:51:00 PM
Abstractly scoffing, I suppose? You turned my brain around with this one Paloma, probably easier done than I want to admit. A challenging read, thank you...
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 12:56:00 PM
You suppose right, takes a warped brain to twist another. Started out about the chaos theory and took on a life of its own. Thanks for sticking it out Charlie. "In chaos theory, the butterfly effect is the sensitive dependence on initial conditions in which a small change in one state of a deterministic nonlinear system can result in large differences in a later state." - Wiki

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