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ABSTRACTIONS ALONE Alone Nor spiders gnats Nor foot-pad, eyes of a cat Sitting Just sitting The sense – round and throbbing HUGE! I exist, atop All is miniscule There is HUM Beyond Hum Inward sensed This? This IMMENSITY! FIRE BUDS Summer heat Evening Come light children In radiant form Shapeless, except as Vibration Fire buds? Yes! Seeds of flame In the invisible air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/11/2012 11:27:00 AM
Yes,, I think you posted this in PFT, right? Good to see it here now. Sorry I have not seen your poems lately. My life is chaos sometimes.
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Date: 11/7/2012 2:20:00 PM
Hmmm..it can be a wonderful feeling just sitting there and being, Daver! Somewhat of a contemplative state. The 'fire buds'...they're like fire flies? I'm having fun reading these verses! Now I'm going out to feed the cardinals...those precious furry little rodents have emptied the feeder AGAIN! Keep well, Love, Mikki :)
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Date: 11/4/2012 2:56:00 PM
Wonderful write here Daver; one thing that Makes me happy is seeing work like this.." It would be a great shame if it was not Posted to be enjoyed..!
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Date: 11/4/2012 2:55:00 PM
love these interesting pieces, Daver
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