Absolution For My Sins
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God who pardons sin
I knock , ask, and you answered.
My sins are many
Sins are a revolt
against you and I desire
to accept Your will
I humbly come for
absolution of my sins
I have committed
let your glory fill ,
show me to be merciful,
strengthen my body
a fault of holding
pain against unforgiving
souls, please forgive me
I desire to kneel
humble myself before You
not sin against Thee
8/17/2016
Contest Name: Forgiveness Senryu
Sponsored by: Laura Loo
Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all.
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http://www.howmanysyllables.com/poem_syllable_counter_workshop/index
Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2016
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