Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Absolute Love

I found you within the 
darkened corners of my mind 
Controlling my very thoughts 
flowing through my being 
Imprinting upon me as no other
Confiscating my dreams 
each night guarding them 
from nightmares 
leaving nighttime fantasies 
of you and I 
Visions of such tender sweetness 
watching our bodies flow 
with the fluidity of unflurling silk 
as our passions fulfill each fantasy 
My essence cries out to yours 
Resistance so weak yet beautiful
Yearning anxiously awaiting 
for those dreams to become reality
So until that day comes 
I will love the nighttime where 
we two rendezvous 
to share our deep absolute love
It's within my nighttime's 
I feel a peace and I can 
truly feel complete joy
Because all I need in my life is 
...YOU!


1st place in Brian Strands contest
1/27/2020

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James Horn February 4, 2020 at 5:09 PM You must be referring to God of course. Brenda Chiri February 5, 2020 at 8:37 AM Thank you hames! Of course it refers to anyone you want!;)

Gershon Wolf February 2, 2020 at 2:08 PM You ONLY need him?! That's it?! No shopping for clothes or shoes? No I-Phone or other devices. Only him... You ARE a saint! ~ Winged cherub Brenda Chiri February 3, 2020 at 5:37 PM Lmao! Thank you Gershon! But that's all anyone should need!;)

JC Brul January 31, 2020 at 11:27 AM Congratulations! A well-deserved winner. The overflowing love and compassion fills the air. Wonderful! Brenda Chiri January 31, 2020 at 11:46 AM Thank you did very much!;)

Gary Radice January 30, 2020 at 10:56 AM Congratulations Brenda! Brenda Chiri January 30, 2020 at 7:09 PM Thank you so much Gary!;)

John Fleming January 30, 2020 at 8:51 AM ah ha! Another win I see. I have said it before and will say it again: you are a formidable poetry contest writer! You seem to be able to tap right into what the sponsor requires each writer to aspire too for each particular subject...certainly you seem able to grasp what is required. Very well done you! Lots of affection as always, Brenda. :) john Brenda Chiri January 30, 2020 at 7:10 PM Wow John thank you so very much! All my affection!;)

Eve Roper January 29, 2020 at 6:13 PM YOU!! Rock, congratulations on your win. Hugs eve Brenda Chiri January 30, 2020 at 6:26 AM Eve thank you so very much! I really appreciate that!;)

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2020 at 3:16 PM wow,so much love and tenderness in this one. Congrats on a superb win with Brian. Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 4:50 PM Thank you Andrea I appreciateyour comnent!;)

Ronald D Thompson January 29, 2020 at 2:14 PM What a wonderfully penned poem Brenda. A well deserved 1st place in the contest.Well done...Ron :) Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 2:34 PM Ron thank you so much!;)

Sam Kauffman January 29, 2020 at 12:37 PM Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your beautiful statement of love with all of its rich imagery! Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 2:34 PM Thank you Sam you are too kind!;)

Vijay Pandit January 29, 2020 at 12:31 PM Congrats on another #1 win in Brian's contest-- charming poem, Brenda. Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 12:33 PM Vijay thank you so much!;)

Edward Ibeh January 29, 2020 at 12:09 PM Beautiful poetry, Brenda:-) Congrats on your top win! Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 12:25 PM Edward thank you so much!;)

Swetha Vangaveti January 29, 2020 at 6:22 AM I felt like a choco velvet cake is dropping through my lips!!! Aww!!! Aww so sweet Brenda!! I'm melting this evening. Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 10:31 AM Lol well I am so happy you enjoyed it!;) thank you!;)

Gordon Mcconnell January 29, 2020 at 6:03 AM Such an absolute superb write Brenda bringing real love to the fore. Great write, Gordon Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 10:30 AM Thank you so much Gordon!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script January 28, 2020 at 1:53 PM Snapping my fingers!!!! Wow very very smooth and beautifully written!!!! Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 1:59 PM Ahh thx G! I appreciate your visit! Lol! As always!;)

Charles Messina January 28, 2020 at 8:38 AM This is so beautiful, Cheryl. A wonderful write! Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 10:30 AM Charles I think you meant a Brenda not Cheryl lol! But thank you so much!;)