Absolute Love

I found you within the darkened corners of my mind Controlling my very thoughts flowing through my being Imprinting upon me as no other Confiscating my dreams each night guarding them from nightmares leaving nighttime fantasies of you and I Visions of such tender sweetness watching our bodies flow with the fluidity of unflurling silk as our passions fulfill each fantasy My essence cries out to yours Resistance so weak yet beautiful Yearning anxiously awaiting for those dreams to become reality So until that day comes I will love the nighttime where we two rendezvous to share our deep absolute love It's within my nighttime's I feel a peace and I can truly feel complete joy Because all I need in my life is ...YOU!
1st place in Brian Strands contest 1/27/2020

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Date: 2/4/2020 5:09:00 PM
You must be referring to God of course.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you hames! Of course it refers to anyone you want!;)
Date: 2/2/2020 2:08:00 PM
You ONLY need him?! That's it?! No shopping for clothes or shoes? No I-Phone or other devices. Only him... You ARE a saint! ~ Winged cherub
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/3/2020 5:37:00 PM
Lmao! Thank you Gershon! But that's all anyone should need!;)
Date: 1/31/2020 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations! A well-deserved winner. The overflowing love and compassion fills the air. Wonderful!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/31/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thank you did very much!;)
Date: 1/30/2020 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Gary!;)
Date: 1/30/2020 8:51:00 AM
ah ha! Another win I see. I have said it before and will say it again: you are a formidable poetry contest writer! You seem to be able to tap right into what the sponsor requires each writer to aspire too for each particular subject...certainly you seem able to grasp what is required. Very well done you! Lots of affection as always, Brenda. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 7:10:00 PM
Wow John thank you so very much! All my affection!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 6:13:00 PM
YOU!! Rock, congratulations on your win. Hugs eve
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 6:26:00 AM
Eve thank you so very much! I really appreciate that!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 3:16:00 PM
wow,so much love and tenderness in this one. Congrats on a superb win with Brian.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea I appreciateyour comnent!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 2:14:00 PM
What a wonderfully penned poem Brenda. A well deserved 1st place in the contest.Well done...Ron :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 2:34:00 PM
Ron thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 12:37:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your beautiful statement of love with all of its rich imagery!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Sam you are too kind!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 12:31:00 PM
Congrats on another #1 win in Brian's contest-- charming poem, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 12:33:00 PM
Vijay thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Brenda:-) Congrats on your top win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 12:25:00 PM
Edward thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 6:22:00 AM
I felt like a choco velvet cake is dropping through my lips!!! Aww!!! Aww so sweet Brenda!! I'm melting this evening.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:31:00 AM
Lol well I am so happy you enjoyed it!;) thank you!;)
Date: 1/29/2020 6:03:00 AM
Such an absolute superb write Brenda bringing real love to the fore. Great write, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/29/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon!;)
Date: 1/28/2020 1:53:00 PM
Snapping my fingers!!!! Wow very very smooth and beautifully written!!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/28/2020 1:59:00 PM
Ahh thx G! I appreciate your visit! Lol! As always!;)
Date: 1/28/2020 8:38:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Cheryl. A wonderful write!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/28/2020 10:30:00 AM
Charles I think you meant a Brenda not Cheryl lol! But thank you so much!;)
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