Absence of Complication

In the absence of complication,
trials and tribulations become distant memories.
Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes -
inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind.

When life contains no difficulty, golden days 
feather float soft perspectives thru freedom airs.
No stress settings shrill chaotic alarms -
releasing my tensions to joy's whispered peace.


(1st stanza written by poet, Silent One and 2nd by me as per a contest's requirements)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hind Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 6:37 PM
Lovely, and wise- you both did great :)
Sands Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations for your win CayCay :)
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 2:53 AM
- Congratulations on your win, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:58 PM
This was a very good poem.. just a little short... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Na Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Cay Cay
Adams Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 9:34 PM
beautifully penned my friend... :) hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Lovely and peaceful like a sapphirine jewel! Be blessed!
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 9:36 AM
Great echo to Silent's verse, stellar writing Cay Cay, no need for wishes, this is a winner!
Green Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful my friend, you have crafted the perfect partner verse for the contest's required verse. This was perfect.
Na Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 3:35 AM
Hi Cay Cay very nice addition. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 1:37 AM
Beautiful CayCay. Happy holidays! xxoo
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