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Above the Clouds

golden sun rays flow
above the clouds - and below
silver linings glow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:08:00 PM

a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2013 10:28:00 PM

a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/26/2013 11:52:00 AM

Congratulations David......Seren

David De La Croes
Date: 6/27/2013 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Seren... Stay well... David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2013 9:16:00 AM

you capture a moment so gracefully with this 'ku.... big cheers on your win, david!..:) huggs

David De La Croes
Date: 6/27/2013 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your kind wishes and embrace... David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/25/2013 9:49:00 PM

David, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

David De La Croes
Date: 6/26/2013 12:16:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. Have an awesome day! ... David

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2013 7:16:00 PM

Very nice, congratulations.

David De La Croes
Date: 6/26/2013 12:15:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. And congratulations to you, too... David

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/25/2013 2:28:00 PM

I really enjoyed how you ended this simple, but beautiful Haiku. A glowing of "silver linings" is a terrific image. Thanks so much for participating.

David De La Croes
Date: 6/26/2013 12:13:00 AM

Thank your for appreciating my little poem, Drake. It is an honour to participate in your contest... David