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Above the Clouds

golden sun rays flow
above the clouds - and below
silver linings glow

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Poet Destroyer A

July 6, 2013 at 11:08 PM

a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

Skat A

July 1, 2013 at 10:28 PM

a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

Seren Roberts

June 26, 2013 at 11:52 AM

Congratulations David......Seren

David De La Croes

June 27, 2013 at 2:26 AM

Thank you, Seren... Stay well... David

Nette Onclaud

June 26, 2013 at 9:16 AM

you capture a moment so gracefully with this 'ku.... big cheers on your win, david!..:) huggs

David De La Croes

June 27, 2013 at 2:26 AM

Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your kind wishes and embrace... David

Poet Destroyer A

June 25, 2013 at 9:49 PM

David, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

David De La Croes

June 26, 2013 at 12:16 AM

Thank you, Linda. Have an awesome day! ... David

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2013 at 7:16 PM

Very nice, congratulations.

David De La Croes

June 26, 2013 at 12:15 AM

Thank you, Richard. And congratulations to you, too... David

Poet Tacito

June 25, 2013 at 2:28 PM

I really enjoyed how you ended this simple, but beautiful Haiku. A glowing of "silver linings" is a terrific image. Thanks so much for participating.

David De La Croes

June 26, 2013 at 12:13 AM

Thank your for appreciating my little poem, Drake. It is an honour to participate in your contest... David

Connie Gildersleeve

June 25, 2013 at 2:02 AM

David I love the metaphore, every cloud has a silver lining. Very optimistic image. Warm Smiles, Connie

David De La Croes

June 25, 2013 at 2:39 AM

Thank you, Connie. I wanted to create a picture of hope always shining through... Cheers, David

Bukang Liwayway

June 24, 2013 at 12:06 PM

three powerful lines...very awesome poem of yours friend David..thanks for dropping by..Have a great summer season..cheers!! Maria

David De La Croes

June 25, 2013 at 12:14 AM

Thanks, Maria. Although it is winter here in the southern hemisphere, I appreciate your well-wishes. Go well, David

Sasha Maharaj

June 24, 2013 at 12:46 AM

Beautiful description. Love it.. Trust you are well David ;)

David De La Croes

June 24, 2013 at 12:47 AM

Thank you, Sasha. When one finds encouragement like yours, everything seems to go well... Cheers, David

Barbara Gorelick

June 19, 2013 at 2:52 PM

Very nice...good that you picked that form..a bit different. I enjoyed. BG

David De La Croes

June 20, 2013 at 12:27 AM

Thank you, Barbara. I am always encouraged by comments like yours. Go well, David

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2013 at 2:41 PM

I like how you rhymed this one. Clever!!

David De La Croes

June 20, 2013 at 12:26 AM

Thanks Andrea! Sometimes I even surprise myself! David

Karen Anglesey

June 19, 2013 at 8:42 AM

Great imagery packed into this little haiku. Delightful :)

David De La Croes

June 20, 2013 at 12:25 AM

Thank you for appreciating it, Karen. Cheers, David

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2013 at 3:22 AM

- Ohhh....this is just BEAUTIFUL, David !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes

June 19, 2013 at 3:27 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Have a super day! David

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