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Above the clouds

golden sun rays flow above the clouds - and below silver linings glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/6/2013 11:08:00 PM
a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:28:00 PM
a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations David......Seren
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/27/2013 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, Seren... Stay well... David
Date: 6/26/2013 9:16:00 AM
you capture a moment so gracefully with this 'ku.... big cheers on your win, david!..:) huggs
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/27/2013 2:26:00 AM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate your kind wishes and embrace... David
Date: 6/25/2013 9:49:00 PM
David, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/26/2013 12:16:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. Have an awesome day! ... David
Date: 6/25/2013 7:16:00 PM
Very nice, congratulations.
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/26/2013 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. And congratulations to you, too... David
Date: 6/25/2013 2:28:00 PM
I really enjoyed how you ended this simple, but beautiful Haiku. A glowing of "silver linings" is a terrific image. Thanks so much for participating.
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/26/2013 12:13:00 AM
Thank your for appreciating my little poem, Drake. It is an honour to participate in your contest... David
Date: 6/25/2013 2:02:00 AM
David I love the metaphore, every cloud has a silver lining. Very optimistic image. Warm Smiles, Connie
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/25/2013 2:39:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I wanted to create a picture of hope always shining through... Cheers, David
Date: 6/24/2013 12:06:00 PM
three powerful lines...very awesome poem of yours friend David..thanks for dropping by..Have a great summer season..cheers!! Maria
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/25/2013 12:14:00 AM
Thanks, Maria. Although it is winter here in the southern hemisphere, I appreciate your well-wishes. Go well, David
Date: 6/24/2013 12:46:00 AM
Beautiful description. Love it.. Trust you are well David ;)
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/24/2013 12:47:00 AM
Thank you, Sasha. When one finds encouragement like yours, everything seems to go well... Cheers, David
Date: 6/19/2013 2:52:00 PM
Very nice...good that you picked that form..a bit different. I enjoyed. BG
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 12:27:00 AM
Thank you, Barbara. I am always encouraged by comments like yours. Go well, David
Date: 6/19/2013 2:41:00 PM
I like how you rhymed this one. Clever!!
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 12:26:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Sometimes I even surprise myself! David
Date: 6/19/2013 8:42:00 AM
Great imagery packed into this little haiku. Delightful :)
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/20/2013 12:25:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating it, Karen. Cheers, David
Date: 6/19/2013 3:22:00 AM
- Ohhh....this is just BEAUTIFUL, David !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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David De la Croes
Date: 6/19/2013 3:27:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Have a super day! David