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above the clouds

"above the clouds" above the clouds a world filled with beauty and grace existing within love and light remains my heart completely free and whole uncaptive forevermore my heart is you below the clouds reality walks beside me knowing our way of life will never be the same still my heart refuses to comprehend or accept the clouds above SkyWatcher 11-09-23

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 9:54:00 AM

High above the clouds but really high up is a mystery which will unfold for us ,each and every one, 'with beauty and grace 'as you say, and as certain as it is below whilst 'reality walks beside me'.....'still my heart refuses to comprehend or accept the clouds above ' The mystery which will unfold- another great write Lisa dear friend. Hugs and blessings,Jennifer. Jennifer,

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/28/2023 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Thank you Jennifer. Hi. Yes, above the clouds is where love lives and where our hearts now are. The list of our loved ones in heaven seem to be longer these days than our loved ones here on earth. Have a beautiful week. I will see you shortly on your page. Peace and Blessings now and always to you. (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 5:56:00 PM

Great attitude, Lisa. Always look for the silver lining, it is always there. "Seek and you shall find." Your words flowed smoothly, like clouds in a fresh breeze. Smiles ~ Blessings my dear friend. Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/14/2023 3:35:00 AM

Thank you Thank you Bill. Good Morning. Yes, may we all look for the silver lining. Never do I take your visits and commentary for granted. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. May today reveal everything good. (smile smile smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 2:03:00 PM

what a delightful and delicately created poem, Ms. Lisa! Above the clouds lies serenity where everyone's heart probably dwells. Below the clouds is the sometimes crushing reality. I, too, have a difficult time with reality, for I cherish what exists above the clouds.Loved your poem, hugs, Sara

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/14/2023 3:54:00 AM

Good Morning Sara. Hi. Thank you Thank you Thank you because I see you understood my thoughts and words. Yes, some of my most important people are above the clouds but I know they are safe away from more suffering and pain. Never do I take your generosity or visits for granted. Have a beautiful morning and day. May today be a great day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/9/2023 12:55:00 PM

A dreamers worst enemy is reality. Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could all live above the clouds. I totally enjoyed reading you today, Lisa. Have a super evening:)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/14/2023 4:05:00 AM

Good Morning Daniel. Hi. Thank you ever so much. Truly. And yes, I agree with you it would be wonderful if we could live about the clouds. That's a beautiful thought but one day we all will and be there within its beauty peace and more. Have a wonderful morning and day. May it reveal everything good. Peace and Blessings always. (smile smile smile)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/9/2023 12:00:00 PM

Dear Lisa, you are truly so creative and i can see you see so much and think deep beyond what you see through your word weaving: above the clouds how theres a more graceful world, you’ve described that in such delicate and eloquent imagery, and how you’ve finished the poem too is so beautiful and touching, i cant even quote lines because this whole poem speaks to my heart, and gives a very evocative touch, truly. How we keep walking with reality refusing to comprehend whats beyond! Another fave

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/14/2023 4:36:00 AM

Good Morning Empress. Hi. I am beyond honored by your gracious and generous commentary and intake. Truly. Thank you ever so much. You leave me speechless. It is a plus for me that you liked my entry enough to leave such commentary to which I do not take for granted. Have a wonderful and beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)