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War is about
forms of revenge
fear and hate
wasted energy
war has been fought 
for centuries
man has been
fighting for things
clinging to things
not realizing
what kind of things 
to cling to
we understand
the need for peace
yet we cannot 
find peace’s path
imagine
there’s no war
there would be 
no sadness
heartbroken mothers
weeping wives
lost children 
war destroys life
peace embraces 
with each breath 
there is security
without thirst
only fulfillment

Edward J. Ebbs - October 25, 2015


Written for a Contest, Promote peace not war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/13/2020 12:40:00 AM
Been in war zones. Good write.
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Date: 1/6/2020 11:39:00 AM
Powerfully written EJ!
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Date: 1/5/2020 9:53:00 PM
war- a game of imperialist devil to show muscle power by enforcing robotic (nonsense patriotic) soldier!!!!
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Date: 12/12/2015 2:14:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments expressed!! Seems we're not bright enough to stop the insanity...
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:36:00 AM
I have no knowledge of this form but you certainly wrote a very fine poem using it!! A7 War is death walking this earth, seeking its prey. O' the day, the day- That God may SEE- and hear every man, every man , TO HIM PRAY.
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Date: 11/20/2015 5:13:00 PM
I always find ones ability to express one thoughts with a conservation of words, the best of poetry. Great job Ed, I'll be back for more.
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:46:00 AM
Hi Edward: You have really personified the ugliness of war in a poem. Great Write!
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:28:00 PM
Edward, war's what keeps the world in bad shape. Deep verse, nothing good comes from it. Not even on the side that conquers. Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 8:17:00 PM
very well done. Edward. I enjoyed your poem using this interesting form
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Date: 10/30/2015 5:51:00 PM
A striking write that goes from the ugliness of war to the benefits of peace. Very interesting form, Ed. // paul
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Date: 10/30/2015 9:13:00 AM
There is much about man that is perplexing. Well written Ed!
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Date: 10/29/2015 4:25:00 AM
Edward, I was unfamiliar with this form. I like it and I enjoyed your insightful poem!
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Date: 10/28/2015 10:32:00 PM
Wonderful description of War, wish it didn't have to be :~) a 7
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Date: 10/27/2015 8:30:00 PM
Edward, you captured war so well in this interesting form, a wonderful 7 ~
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:26:00 PM
Covers the effects of war. Nicely put Edward. God bless.
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Date: 10/25/2015 11:48:00 PM
Very nice thanks for sharing
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