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Choka Poetry Contest / Nette Onclaud

searching empty rooms ~ what do my tender hopes seek now that I am out of sight ~ ~ mattered - not oblique ~ ~ sadly - whole house seems aloof even walls just feel the roof

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Date: 6/8/2025 9:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "About This Place" write. Great last line. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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