About the Time I Started Writing Poems

Once
upon 
a time, my
hair was colored
blonde. I shed some weight
and, as if by magic,
kept it off for a few years 
which were as golden as my hair. 
My children had barely left the nest,
but many new things occupied my time.
I took a cruise, saw Rio with a friend,
learned to belly dance and play guitar!
Golden times are fleeting. One day
my processed hair crumbled. It
literally crumbled,
like straw, in my hands,
about the time
I started
writing
poems.

Not my best, PD, but one that I am fond of. I think I have exhausted using my 
ones I consider the best!!

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Date: 11/11/2020 9:57:00 PM
I see you posted this on your 8th day at Soup. Yet your author's note puzzles me: "I think I have exhausted using my ones I consider the best". How can that be if this was only your second etheree posted here? Regardless of that, this makes a thought-provoking little slice-of-life bio chapter telling what you were like right before you caught the poetry bug.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/12/2020 10:32:00 AM
I don't remember the situation, but maybe at that point in time I had already put up my very best etheree and later on, I have written more and more?? I just don't remember what I was talking about there.
Date: 11/1/2014 6:37:00 PM
Talk about a small world I can belly dance too but try and find someone who will let you dance on their belly. Just dropped in to fav this one.
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Date: 2/3/2014 4:42:00 PM
Andrea can you belly dance and play guitar at the same time though? David
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/3/2014 7:15:00 PM
No and also I am so out of practice, I don't even know if I can do either one by itself any more!!!
Date: 1/11/2014 12:20:00 AM
Enjoyed the write and congratulations on the win, Andrea
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Date: 1/10/2014 11:30:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations:):):) If you'd like take a trip to my blog ----> ON THE ROCKS------ http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18527&PoetID=18720 <---- enjoy if you'd like... Love Always & Forever <3 LINDA <3
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Date: 7/14/2013 10:50:00 PM
Oooh, so this is when you started writing poetry. Good poem
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Date: 2/11/2013 5:26:00 PM
Wow! Awesome piece Andrea. Enjoyed reading. You are a spectacular poet and have gone so far and grown so much. Your work is golden and so lively. It's always a pleasure reading your inspirations. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:04:00 PM
I guess we all need a reason for poetry, I like this, it is honest and very well written, which does not surprised me at all. harry
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:08:00 PM
WOW,,,girl you rock,,,so neat....
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/6/2012 1:28:00 AM
beautiful, i don't talk much and my social life consists of a pen and a paper, "at first glance it seems a blue and yellow insignificant plastic, my pen is a weapon with which i channel my mind on paper" someone wrought that. :)
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:26:00 AM
very nice :)
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Date: 1/3/2012 8:10:00 PM
Very Good!
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Date: 1/3/2012 1:40:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your etheree being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 2/2/2011 12:46:00 PM
Well...we already know the rest of the story! Poetry is one of your strong points! You are a wonderful poet! Anymore belly dancing? (Speaking of dancing...I saw Black Swan with Carolyn last week. The dancing was beautiful...but being a ballet, I didn't even think to look at the rating "R" I was in shock...I'm old, but have sheltered my brain! I enjoyed the movie, though...dancing was great, but the storyline was weird.)
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Date: 1/9/2011 11:49:00 AM
Excellent!This form Etheree is very interesting.
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Date: 7/24/2010 10:43:00 AM
Dear Andrea: Great poem. Sometimes something positive can be derived from a negative event. Thank U so much 4 (again) reading and commenting on my poem. May your day be wonderful. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:43:00 AM
"My hair is getting thin, but who wants fat hair anyway?" A little humor after reading a rather tragic Etheree. I can see why you love the Etheree. You got it mastered, kid. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:26:00 PM
you learned to belly dance? really?lol. thats kind of funny. BET THAT WAS FUN. and thats pretty scary, it crumbled. whoo. . .i'd probably scream. i love my hair.lol -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/22/2010 2:44:00 PM
ohhhhhhh horrorifying?? yikers! Light & Love
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Date: 2/2/2010 3:34:00 PM
The question to be asked...If you had not started writing poetry would you still have your processed hair? I think not, your poetry is marvelous, entertaining, and educational. Therefore, one must look beyond this very important time for another cause. As much as I love children, I would blame the kids. Mac
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Date: 1/9/2010 9:17:00 PM
Impressive, reading each line, the flow is more like you are speaking rather than writing, a unique quality. Wonderful, simply wonderful.
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:06:00 PM
Since u wrote this on my birthday, May 21st, and I am also a platinum blond lady I am treasuring this poem Andrea to my favorites... so far no crumbling locks for me.. but writing poems it always my option and escape to lands I create with dreams in tow... thankxxx for sharing this wonderful poetry today.. and for your ever gracious comments on my poetry also.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/2/2010 5:44:00 PM
Well I believe that writing poetry can sustain one through "bad weather" of all kinds. Fine example of the form as well. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/1/2010 9:03:00 AM
that sure is scary! Hopefully your hair is ok now--but happy for you that despite your hair going to pieces, something beautiful came out of it--you writing poetry :) keep writing!
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