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I am a fragile floret floating in the wind seeking a sanctuary to seed.

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Jean Murray

Date: 10/8/2016 4:53:00 AM

Oh lonely seed. I hope that wind leads you to open petals.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/7/2016 3:59:00 PM

Metaphorically beautiful! Congrats on a fine win, Tim! // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 10/7/2016 7:48:00 AM

Even in a single line you still rock and shine my dear friend, Tim! You're amazing poet. Many congrats both on this excellent monoku and your win! Hugs and cheers! Thank you so much for sharing and your lovely greetings. love lots and hug, Leonora

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/6/2016 9:54:00 PM

Tim....hope you find that sanctuary you seek. Lovely write. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2016 7:57:00 PM

oh my, Tim. It's a bit sad! And yet I really do see that sensitive side of you! Flower power, my friend, and congrats on your win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2016 2:10:00 PM

Hi Tim, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win: -) Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/6/2016 7:36:00 AM

A beautiful description of self, Tim:) very poetic too:) congratulations:)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 9:31:00 AM

Thank you Jo

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/6/2016 6:37:00 AM

Excellent. A great description and done well. Thanks for sharing it.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Ravi

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/6/2016 5:12:00 AM

When you write so beautifully who could doubt that you are my friend, Tim? A huge seven!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/5/2016 7:49:00 PM

A very sunny poem!!!! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Arthur

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/5/2016 7:06:00 PM

what a great description! well done, tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Ilene

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/5/2016 6:23:00 PM

your element is air---breezy, spontaneous, and free-flowing, tim... lovely write about you..huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 7:23:00 PM

Thank you very much nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2016 4:36:00 PM

I like the alliteration you used. I am sure you will place high... Clever ... now about that sanctuary...lol... Love LINDA

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 7:22:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/5/2016 2:56:00 PM

Hi Tim, Daniel inspired you to write a good monoku. It was poetic with great metaphors . I wish the best in the contest: -) Alexis

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 3:20:00 PM

It is nice when you can get inspired by others.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/5/2016 2:16:00 PM

I can picture the floret in the wind...Love the metaphors which reveal the gentleness..indeed there is.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/5/2016 3:34:00 PM

yes it does ...you are gentle and kind dear friend

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Charma. I do think it reflects part of me.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/5/2016 10:38:00 AM

Mind, you don't hurt yourself...

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 12:34:00 PM

I'll try not to Charlie

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/5/2016 10:33:00 AM

Nice Metaphorical Monoku ... GL ...

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Probir

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/5/2016 9:44:00 AM

In other words, you're a horny devil. Lol I knew it would have something to do with love. Read the reply I left on your comment.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/5/2016 9:48:00 AM

You are too funny DT. Good luck with your Razorbacks this weekend.