About Caleb's Money

Down to his last silver dollar,
Had been for many a year,
Caleb felt rich as long as
He had that last dollar near.

He’d made a million, believe it. 
And through his fingers, went it all
He was terrified of being poor,
So he worked or stole for anything at all.

He’d set his value on money,
(God told us not to do that},
He just couldn’t help himself,
Always wore a new felt hat.

Didn’t have a love, no friends,
Couldn’t spend money on those,
Had a little dilapidated book,
The finest condo, rows and rows of clothes.

Alone in his Armani suit,
One night he felt sick and bleak,
A walker found him in the snow.
Frozen tears covered his cheeks.

Still, though, down in his pocket 
Forever it would be
That last shiny silver dollar,
A slave, though he thought he was free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 8:06 AM
A most excellent piece, I’m glad I stopped by.
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 3:00 PM
moved by this fantastic anecdote, sun...from riches to emotional rags, ohhh...huggs
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:27 PM
You are so encouraging. Thank you.
Salehi Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Wow, what a story...
Salehi Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Very creative...
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Thrilled that you liked it and took the time to comment.
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Superb write my friend...a lesson for all...love & light...^WW^
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Love and light to you, too WW, and a big thank you.
Horsman Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Clever and creative, love the moral and the morale to the poem...like this!
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Moral and morale - I like that! Thank you.
Man Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Enjoyed your creative write!
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Appreciate your commenting.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:24 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting.
Letts Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Money talks in lascivious whispers and disguises the shape of chains.
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:23 PM
You've got that right, Cliff. Thanks for the comment.
Adams Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Not many that haven't fallen into that trap! Well done my friend!........80)
Wanter Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much.
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