About Book of Revelations

About Book of Revelations

This idea with you thought I should share
Is a crazy crime when we start to compare
Each of our personal assets and debits
Yet we still will leave out all of the credits.

In all movies credits are saved until the last
Whole thing went by and is part of the past
Bible was written with many contemplations
Leaving last book until end about Revelations.

I continue reading Revelations and will persist
Most difficult book to understand that does exist
Is like an effect causing an emphatic cataclysm 
And you start suffering from another aneurism.  

There are ways God can get and grab our attention
But in my poem here are too many to mention
So with God each party made a miraculous deal
Book of Revelations they all decided to repeal.

James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/4/2015 12:23:00 PM
This is a fun and clever perspective on the book of Revelations, James. It is a difficult book to understand, but so exciting to read! I enjoyed your well written poem!
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Date: 5/4/2015 6:49:00 PM
Laura, I am amazed at how people are finding my poems. Noticed that Sharon Gulley has also read it. It must be something about the title of the poem that attracts people to read it. Jim Horn
Date: 5/4/2015 10:22:00 AM
An awesome write indeed....Sharon G. :)
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Date: 5/4/2015 6:51:00 PM
Sharon, Glad to see that Laura and you liked my poem. The title must be what attracts people. I am approaching 1,200 total poems written. Jim Horn
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