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About a Rose

I found this poem I want you to see This Poem was written, And it was just for me It's about a rose that has its thorns Resembling how ones life can suddenly be torn This beautiful poem has caught my eye Because it was written without any disguise I never saw the thorns on that beautiful flower Is a poem about love and it's heart binding power love can be strong and sometimes it's blind ceasing our hearts and controlling our minds love is something you should never throw away but remember be careful it can easily astray that flower i picked was just right for me as i knelt back up from off my knees if only i knew and if only i could see the thorns on that flower were strong while i was weak they sliced me open and cut my wounds so deep now all i can do is sit back and weep as i pick my heart from off your feet Your rose has turned to black satin and died And in another red velvet rose, i will confide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/14/2010 9:00:00 AM
Congrats on your feature Kelli! Looking forward to reading more of your work...Lay
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Kelli. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2010 6:08:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Krlli. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 2:52:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. .. so enjoyed your touching and creative write tonight... hope your stay on soup is fun.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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