Ablaze

Down where purple Wisteria blooms
Love's presence draws nature
Setting aflame breathless desire
Hearts soften thoughts alter

Birds pair, adoring sight fills love's cup
Beautiful in love's flight
Attentive you become charming
Affectionate delight

Spring's allure captivating my thoughts
So ablaze I love thee
Each absorbing thought is of you
Admirable yet brawny

Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Contest: Spring is in the air
Written this 28th day of February 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Whimsical piece! I adored all the close attention to detail through out and this particular line "Hearts soften thoughts alter"... it really describes the feeling of spring in the air, for me. Where one finds beauty more and thinks just a little less. Delightful poem!
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March 10, 2013 at 9:14 PM
SARA, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD
Guzzi Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Ah Spring, I can't wait Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Sara luv xx
May Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:04 PM
congrats on a fine win Sara
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Beautiful poetry by you Sara.Congrats on your win.
Richards Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 9:02 AM
What a beauty this is!! Congratulations on your win!!! Alive with spring!
Gorelick Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on a supurb write and win. BG
Squyres Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Love and Spring... walk sweetly hand in hand !! Enjoyed and Congratulations on your win !!
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:18 AM
Many congratulations on your win Sara hope you are well. :-)
Roberts Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 11:27 PM
congrats on your second place win Sara,its lovely, just lovely
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 11:21 PM
Happy to share honors with you, Sara. Love, Joyce
Ivy D Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 2:39 PM
nice~Sandy
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Hope springs eternal.....you captured that here in this terrific write! Hugs
Horne Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 3:35 PM
wow, a truly beautiful write here, Sara - another sure winner
Sivey Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 3:30 PM
This is a wonderful and dynamic write my friend! You have presented a tremendous poem! You have put me in awe with the splendor of your incredible piece, Great Work!!
Ober Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:37 PM
This is the perfect Spring poem, full of innocence and new beginnings. Beautiful descriptions, Sara!
Manassian Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 12:10 PM
Sara....this is so romantic! :) I LOVE PURPLE Wisteria blooms. Hubby and I have a photo with purple blooms framing us. What a delightful write! Hugs!
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