Yanny Widjanarko Poet Free verse

Aberrant Waffle

In a moment my Mom just came
She said when we welcomed by the death
Maybe the soul would be shifted to other planet
Possibly moon is the waiting room

She said people could float in the outer space
Similar thing that spirits do
Maybe we granted a pair of wings
When we flee to the planet unseen

I said
Maybe other world just like Bermuda
When we blink, abandon the world
We just begin in other swirl

Possibly Mars would be an option

Digress thoughts but colored my day
Silly talked but tickled my brain
She inspires the time of spare 
Dearest Mom I thanked you for share



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                                                     Honorable Mention
              Any poem not posted for a contest in the last 3 months under 20 lines
                                             Contest Judged:  11/12/2012 
                                          Sponsored by: Black Eyed Susan
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Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2012 at 7:43 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Yanny. Love, Carol Yanny Widjanarko November 15, 2012 at 8:07 AM Thank you very much Carol, and glad to have a visit by you :) have a great day :D - Hug, Yanny

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2012 at 4:40 PM this is so sweet how you talk with your mom. YOu would not believe the silly things my son would try to discuss with me when he was a teen. I enjoyed this. Congrats on the win. Yanny Widjanarko November 13, 2012 at 4:52 PM Thank you Andrea :), glad to know that you enjoyed this poem, sometimes silly talked needed between me and my mom, just for filling the empty space between us and replaced it with giggles, I really enjoyed those conversation too :D - Hug, Yanny

Len Gasun November 13, 2012 at 8:22 AM Many congratulations Yanny! hugs, LG Yanny Widjanarko November 13, 2012 at 8:38 AM Thank you very much LG - rehug, :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 13, 2012 at 12:26 AM Congratulations on your win Yanny, well done xx Yanny Widjanarko November 13, 2012 at 12:46 AM Thank you Mandy :)

Poet Destroyer A November 12, 2012 at 4:44 PM Yanny, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd Yanny Widjanarko November 12, 2012 at 4:46 PM Thank you PD :)

Kash Poet November 12, 2012 at 8:16 AM Very nice Yanny!Congrats on your win. Yanny Widjanarko November 12, 2012 at 8:49 AM Thank you Kash :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2012 at 6:24 AM Yanny, this is very well written poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko November 8, 2012 at 7:45 AM Thank you Anne - hug Yanny :)

Richard Palmer November 7, 2012 at 6:41 PM nice write Yanny Yanny Widjanarko November 7, 2012 at 7:09 PM Thank you Richard :) - Yanny

Poet Destroyer A November 6, 2012 at 7:17 PM Yanny, a lovely poem, to mom...love PD Yanny Widjanarko November 6, 2012 at 7:24 PM Thank's PD for stopping by :) - Regard Yanny