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In a moment my Mom just came She said when we welcomed by the death Maybe the soul would be shifted to other planet Possibly moon is the waiting room She said people could float in the outer space Similar thing that spirits do Maybe we granted a pair of wings When we flee to the planet unseen I said Maybe other world just like Bermuda When we blink, abandon the world We just begin in other swirl Possibly Mars would be an option Digress thoughts but colored my day Silly talked but tickled my brain She inspires the time of spare Dearest Mom I thanked you for share *************************************************************** Honorable Mention Any poem not posted for a contest in the last 3 months under 20 lines Contest Judged: 11/12/2012 Sponsored by: Black Eyed Susan ***************************************************************

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Date: 11/15/2012 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Yanny. Love, Carol
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/15/2012 8:07:00 AM
Thank you very much Carol, and glad to have a visit by you :) have a great day :D - Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/13/2012 4:40:00 PM
this is so sweet how you talk with your mom. YOu would not believe the silly things my son would try to discuss with me when he was a teen. I enjoyed this. Congrats on the win.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/13/2012 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :), glad to know that you enjoyed this poem, sometimes silly talked needed between me and my mom, just for filling the empty space between us and replaced it with giggles, I really enjoyed those conversation too :D - Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/13/2012 8:22:00 AM
Many congratulations Yanny! hugs, LG
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/13/2012 8:38:00 AM
Thank you very much LG - rehug, :D
Date: 11/13/2012 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Yanny, well done xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/13/2012 12:46:00 AM
Thank you Mandy :)
Date: 11/12/2012 4:44:00 PM
Yanny, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/12/2012 4:46:00 PM
Thank you PD :)
Date: 11/12/2012 8:16:00 AM
Very nice Yanny!Congrats on your win.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/12/2012 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Kash :)
Date: 11/8/2012 6:24:00 AM
Yanny, this is very well written poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/8/2012 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Anne - hug Yanny :)
Date: 11/7/2012 6:41:00 PM
nice write Yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/7/2012 7:09:00 PM
Thank you Richard :) - Yanny
Date: 11/6/2012 7:17:00 PM
Yanny, a lovely poem, to mom...love PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/6/2012 7:24:00 PM
Thank's PD for stopping by :) - Regard Yanny

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