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" KING OF THE SKY " MY PHOTO, ©

Image may contain: ocean, sky, twilight, outdoor, nature and water

on night's soft pillow sky's king is falling asleep- abdication's dream!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 16 June 2020 * Seeing everything that happens these days around the world and being disappointed, the sun might like to give up his throne so he doesn't have to witness tomorrow!

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Date: 6/28/2020 6:16:00 AM
It is indeed a bleak time; which means we have to be more sun-like ourselves and accentuate the positives.
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Date: 6/18/2020 6:37:00 PM
Very sad indeed, captured in your insightful poem!
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Date: 6/16/2020 2:02:00 PM
If I where the sun I wouldn't mind abdicating myself! This poem is so powerful and it is going to haunt me for a while.
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Date: 6/16/2020 8:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend, Kudzai for your excellent comment. My intention was not...to hount you or anyone else but to underline the dark times we live in. Blessings.
Date: 6/16/2020 1:18:00 PM
Demetrios you have captured a moment of beauty and have given it a reason based on the sad reality of mankind. An exceptional piece my friend. Blessings your way...
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Date: 6/16/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you , Michael, my good friend for your comprehension. God bless you and keep you healthy and happy
Date: 6/16/2020 7:39:00 AM
But tomorrow the sun will return--I get your point my friend. well said, Demetrios.
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Date: 6/16/2020 7:56:00 AM
Yes, fortunately, the sun will return tomorrow but the time will come in the very distant future that the sun will not return my friend! Thank you!
Date: 6/16/2020 5:12:00 AM
Certainly enjoying a well earned rest after providing the earth with warmth and light. Love your photo Demetrios. Tom
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Date: 6/16/2020 6:27:00 AM
The photo I took yesterday in Saronida, Greece! Love sunsets. Thank you for your visit dear, Tom! Blessings
Date: 6/16/2020 5:01:00 AM
wow.. lol.. It made me smile.. night's soft pillow.. Great Haiku Demetrios...
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Date: 6/16/2020 6:24:00 AM
Sun was your and my inspiration today dearest, Jenish. Our Muses were ...collaborating! hahaha. Hugs xxx and blessings!