Beautiful Scars Poet Tanka

Abandoned By Love

abandoned by love
surrendered in callous haste-
deserted with cede
renounced with such heartless ease- 
please release me with mercy

your freedom my chains
easily given away-
relinquished desire
submissive with my heart and
resigned without a notice


Double Tanka
September 29, 2016

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Moon Flower October 2, 2016 at 5:18 AM One word: stunning! ;)

Joanna Daniel October 1, 2016 at 3:38 AM Great tankas:)

Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2016 at 10:29 PM Wonderfully written Luloo! ; )

Pashang Salehi September 29, 2016 at 6:31 PM You are a writing machine with tremendous talent. Amazing!

Eve Roper September 29, 2016 at 4:48 PM Very good write, Laura, I liked it the other way tooo... Hugs good luck in the contest..

Constance La France September 29, 2016 at 3:29 PM Laura, beautifully penned Tanka's, I love that line, your freedom my chains ~

Daniel Turner September 29, 2016 at 10:43 AM I have felt this way a few times myself. Letting go of love is never easy for some. I think the one who abandons another could not have been in love in the first place or doesn't know what love is. I love your poem, Laura. I certainly respect your talent!

Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2016 at 9:11 AM Well expressed piece. ;0) a 7. Beautiful Scars September 29, 2016 at 10:07 AM thank you very much Richard :)-luloo