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Abandoned By Love

abandoned by love surrendered in callous haste- deserted with cede renounced with such heartless ease- please release me with mercy your freedom my chains easily given away- relinquished desire submissive with my heart and resigned without a notice Double Tanka September 29, 2016

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Moon Flower

Date: 10/2/2016 5:18:00 AM

One word: stunning! ;)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/1/2016 3:38:00 AM

Great tankas:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/29/2016 10:29:00 PM

Wonderfully written Luloo! ; )

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/29/2016 6:31:00 PM

You are a writing machine with tremendous talent. Amazing!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2016 4:48:00 PM

Very good write, Laura, I liked it the other way tooo... Hugs good luck in the contest..

Constance La France

Date: 9/29/2016 3:29:00 PM

Laura, beautifully penned Tanka's, I love that line, your freedom my chains ~

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/29/2016 10:43:00 AM

I have felt this way a few times myself. Letting go of love is never easy for some. I think the one who abandons another could not have been in love in the first place or doesn't know what love is. I love your poem, Laura. I certainly respect your talent!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2016 9:11:00 AM

Well expressed piece. ;0) a 7.

Lu Loo
Date: 9/29/2016 10:07:00 AM

thank you very much Richard :)-luloo