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Abandoned Barn

Ambling along a country lane, a weathered barn caught my eye. Nigh it stood a crumbling silo, yet reaching for the sky. Oaks raised leafless arms heavenward, on that bleak autumn day, As if in supplication, pleading to deter its inexorable decay. The once sturdy structure was now in forlorn shambles, Nearly over taken by tall grasses, weeds and brambles. On its weathered boards were traces of faded reddish paint. A Mail Pouch Tobacco mural graced one side, tho' very faint. Atop the sagging roof was a rusted, squeaky weather vane, Turning listlessly at the whim of the fickle wind's gust or wane. A lightning rod, even in its day, considered somewhat odd, Had collapsed - its copper pinnacle buried beneath the sod. Rusty hinges protested as I opened the door and ventured thro'. I startled a flock of pigeons, creating bedlam as they flew! Mice skittered across the floor in the dimly filtered light, As they raced about in confusion in their frenzied flight! What once had sheltered cattle and stored the farmer's grain, Was the hapless prey of the lashing storms' complete disdain. For such old abandoned barns, I have a very special affinity, And enjoy visiting them whenever I am in their vicinity! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved)

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Date: 3/3/2010 2:56:00 PM
Another winner, Bob. You mentioned your Dec cruise. We are booked for Nov 27 on the Oasis. We've cruised around this time for what will be our 7th year in a row. Looking forward to being on the largest cruise ship to date. There's about 40 in our party (about 18 family members). Should be fun Have a good one - Ralph.
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:49:00 PM
I wrote a poem early on about a red barn(check it out)..but this is much better..Just terrific rhyming. another star for the king of rhyme. BG
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:27:00 PM
Visited a barn like this in Pennsylvania once and I swore I could still hear the sounds of the cattle. Each time another farm forecloses, a bard is left to fall to "shambles," but passersby are often intrigued enough to check them out. Thanks for restoring this memory for me, Bob. Love, Carolyn
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