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Barbara Gorelick

Abandoned

 
Rusting old screen door
Gateway to a once loved home
Banging in the wind
Echoing children's voices
As they came and went each day



For the Tanka contest....

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2012

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 20, 2012 at 5:55 AM

Congratulations Barbara love xx

Poet Destroyer A

December 19, 2012 at 8:42 PM

Barbara :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

Andrea Dietrich

December 19, 2012 at 4:00 PM

this one is sad but elegant. I love it, Barbara and congrats for your well deserved win.

Kathryn Collins

December 7, 2012 at 9:29 AM

That door banging the wind. I'll never forget it. Great poem,

December 6, 2012 at 7:36 PM

As always, excellent, BG! Best wishes for the contest. Love, Annalise

Constance La France

December 5, 2012 at 1:38 PM

Barbara, this is an outstanding Tanka, I really enjoyed reading it, best of luck in the contest. Constance

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 5, 2012 at 12:25 PM

My Dearest Most Only beLOVEd, Barbara Jean, Congratulations Good Luck LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

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