Abandoned

They lay by the seashore, 
Vessels that were once war ready, 
They struck with an invincible claw, 
Sailing buoyed and steady. 

Its inhabitants were ruthless, 
They had their chambers in hell, 
They were brutal and merciless, 
Everyone that challenged them fell. 

Cursed by the sea, 
They became a shadow,
Gloom pervaded their glee, 
Their courage became a shrivelled meadow. 

Their pride led to their fall, 
The vessels became a sighing hall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:27 PM
Thompson, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
Emate Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured.
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:42 AM
- Congratulations on the great win in the contest, Thompson :) -
Emate Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Anne. It's an honour.
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