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Abandoned

They lay by the seashore, Vessels that were once war ready, They struck with an invincible claw, Sailing buoyed and steady. Its inhabitants were ruthless, They had their chambers in hell, They were brutal and merciless, Everyone that challenged them fell. Cursed by the sea, They became a shadow, Gloom pervaded their glee, Their courage became a shrivelled meadow. Their pride led to their fall, The vessels became a sighing hall.

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Date: 9/12/2023 5:27:00 PM
Thompson, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Date: 9/12/2023 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. I'm honoured.
Date: 8/23/2023 10:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on the great win in the contest, Thompson :) -
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Date: 8/24/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Anne. It's an honour.

Book: Shattered Sighs