Abandoned

Hear a babe in his crib who is wailing,
left there with a rash that’s got infected
From hours of sobbing, his voice is trailing . . .
What monsters left their son so neglected?

Now see a girl; she’s only four years old.
She is lost and feels so disconcerted.
It’s getting dark; the wind is bitter cold.
How long will she survive, now deserted?

Picture this: A pimple-faced boy, fourteen
is walking home from a dance, dejected.
The girls he asked for a dance were so mean!
Why stay there longer being rejected?

See a bride. Her groom's not there. She's in tears.
She waits with her many guests at the church
as she faces one of her secret fears.
She can't believe she's been left in a lurch.

A groom sees his bride on his wedding day
walk down the aisle. He can’t wait to be hitched.
Suddenly she turns!  She’s a runaway!
His smile fades, for he knows that he’s been ditched.

See someone wed for years – hair turning grey.
Her sons are grown; she’s a sad rose wilted
next to her ex-husband’s young fiance -
 the epitome of being jilted!

But wait . . .the most tragic by far
together with these others I have lumped.
This last poor soul is carried in a car
to the woods where - throat slashed - she then is dumped.

June 18, 2020
For the Thesaurus - Abandon Or Abandoned Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/24/2020 7:09:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this beautifully penned poem, I like where you took the theme _Constance
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Date: 6/22/2020 12:31:00 PM
Hello mam, Congratulations for the deserved win:-) Expressively written with thought provoking interrogation's.:-)Loved your work Covered most of the concepts in this single piece.It's definitely a fave for me.:-) Keep writing.Keep inspiring:-) Take care.With love.~Deepa
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Date: 6/22/2020 7:57:00 AM
Such a powerful,dark, heart wrenching portrayal of abandoned humans and emotions Andrea! This is deep in so many aspects. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings. Much love to you :)
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Date: 6/22/2020 6:26:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Love and prayers for you, Gina
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Date: 6/22/2020 2:46:00 AM
One of your darker writes, but PERFECT for the contest. So many good examples of how we can be abandoned by others; the last stanza downright heartstopping. Congrats on your deserved #1 finish Andrea!
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Date: 6/21/2020 12:59:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you for your wonderful first placement in this contest Andrea. I hope you enjoy Father’s Day. xxoo
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Date: 6/21/2020 12:22:00 PM
Some painful examples of what it's like to be abandoned, Very nicely inked Andrea..
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Date: 6/21/2020 1:16:00 PM
And I see you've won, Congrats!
Date: 6/21/2020 12:03:00 PM
Andrea, great write, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/20/2020 11:26:00 PM
Hello Andrea … a bit daunting reading your poem with all these situations one after the other and then reflecting on at different stages read about them all occurring. It can be a very cruel world indeed - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 6/19/2020 4:28:00 PM
Life can be harsh to those that are affected. This world can be cruel. You have given examples here Andrea.
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Date: 6/19/2020 3:19:00 PM
Great write Andrea, so compelling giving a different situation in every verse. super piece, Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/19/2020 10:30:00 AM
I like the idea of compiling the rhymes in one theme...Well done too
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Date: 6/19/2020 9:29:00 AM
Whoa! Many cases of abandonment, sad indeed..
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Date: 6/18/2020 6:20:00 PM
Oh, I love this, Andrea:-) Excellent write! Best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/18/2020 5:02:00 PM
The crazy cruelty of troubled souls with mental illness and apathy will always be a lament for those of us who care. Well written voice for all those who have suffered. Excellent! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/18/2020 3:21:00 PM
Ooh! Cuts to the heart!
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Date: 6/18/2020 1:43:00 PM
Who needs a devil with man's inhumanity to man? Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/18/2020 11:24:00 AM
Wow. So sad and so well worded - I wish you a win, dear friend... Love and prayers sent your way, Gina
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Date: 6/18/2020 10:55:00 AM
Andrea, Stark images and realization, each with a heavy loss. This poem scratches at the heart, makes you think. Do unto others... -Richard
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Date: 6/18/2020 9:55:00 AM
I think you got all the alternative words Andrea. Good luck in the contest Tom
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