Abandoned

    "She"who was 
deserted by her husband
is now swimming with positive thoughts,
aiming profusely to reach the shore 
with the drive of knowledge
gained in earlier life.Occu-
pation is now keeping her 
steady and independent.
Never can the inexp-
erienced people 
understand the pain she has gone 
through untill and unless they are subjected 
to the same one.Stirred up with bitterness she 
sits alone in a corner everyday and pours out her 
inevitable pain to the vacant space;Often alluding to 
her foolish marriage she whimpers secretly ,trying to 
conceal her scars from her parents and pals.Fervently 
questions God for joining her destiny with a wrong 
mate.Whenever she steps out of her house hurdles 
are impatiently crawling on her back digging up 
her imprisoned life, to which she hammers 
them boldly by her sharp screwing words.
But once she returns home she throws
away the public facade and easily
relinquishes.., slumps 
on floor helpless 
and only 
 sobs 
cuddling
darkness.
She prays her 
deity not to create 
such an unworthy
disastrous renounced 
matrimonial relationship to 
any other women in the world.

17-6-2020

 4th place in the Contest.
Note: "Thesaurus ~Abandon or Abandoned 
Poetry Contest".
Sponsored by Dear Heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/24/2020 7:45:00 PM
V, congratulations on your in in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:42:00 PM
Hello mam, Thankyou for your constant support and motivation:-)Am glad to know that my poem triumphed your heart.:-) Keep inspiring.Best wishes. Take care.With love.Deepa:-)
Date: 6/22/2020 8:23:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win dear Deepa. Lots of love and blessings for you :)
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thankyou for your constant wishes and love :-)Received your blessings mam.Tons of love sent to you:-) Take care.~Deepa:-)
Date: 6/17/2020 6:41:00 PM
Hello Deepa, I feel the pain of this woman.I wonder why she is her abandoned by her husband. Did she do something wrong? Have a nice evening my friend. love Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2020 8:41:00 AM
Oh Deepa , that is so sad. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs .Love, Darlene Enjoy your day.
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/19/2020 2:23:00 PM
Hello mam, Women who are brave seek for divorce. Women who are suppressed and tossed up with restrictions doesn't question ,in stead they just sob and die. I am talking from the point of our Indian culture.I believe I answered your question. Enjoy your day.Take care mam:-)much love~Deepa
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/19/2020 12:35:00 PM
Hello Deepa I have a question to ask.Can she seek a divorce from her husband? Then is another husband found for her? i was just wondering. Enjoy your day my friend. Take care. love Darlene
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/18/2020 4:41:00 AM
Hello mam, Yes It's so painful to see few women suffering abandonment. Especially without any fault of theirs.No she didn't do anything wrong.It's been already written in each of our fate's.What is going to happen will happen. Enjoy your day too:-) Take care .Much love~Deepa.:-)
Date: 6/17/2020 2:10:00 PM
This is a brilliant poem in many aspects Deepa. A heartfelt write, outstanding creativity blended with hope and emotions that feel real and let the reader travel with them.
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/18/2020 4:37:00 AM
Hello Aditi mam, Thankyou very much for your uplifting words. Feel so honoured while I read your encouraging words.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa
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