Abandoned

"She"who was deserted by her husband is now swimming with positive thoughts, aiming profusely to reach the shore with the drive of knowledge gained in earlier life.Occu- pation is now keeping her steady and independent. Never can the inexp- erienced people understand the pain she has gone through untill and unless they are subjected to the same one.Stirred up with bitterness she sits alone in a corner everyday and pours out her inevitable pain to the vacant space;Often alluding to her foolish marriage she whimpers secretly ,trying to conceal her scars from her parents and pals.Fervently questions God for joining her destiny with a wrong mate.Whenever she steps out of her house hurdles are impatiently crawling on her back digging up her imprisoned life, to which she hammers them boldly by her sharp screwing words. But once she returns home she throws away the public facade and easily relinquishes.., slumps on floor helpless and only sobs cuddling darkness. She prays her deity not to create such an unworthy disastrous renounced matrimonial relationship to any other women in the world. 17-6-2020 4th place in the Contest. Note: "Thesaurus ~Abandon or Abandoned Poetry Contest". Sponsored by Dear Heart.

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Constance La France

Date: 6/24/2020 7:45:00 PM

V, congratulations on your in in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance

V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:42:00 PM

Hello mam, Thankyou for your constant support and motivation:-)Am glad to know that my poem triumphed your heart.:-) Keep inspiring.Best wishes. Take care.With love.Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 8:23:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win dear Deepa. Lots of love and blessings for you :)

V. Deepa
Date: 6/22/2020 11:46:00 AM

Thankyou for your constant wishes and love :-)Received your blessings mam.Tons of love sent to you:-) Take care.~Deepa:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/17/2020 6:41:00 PM

Hello Deepa, I feel the pain of this woman.I wonder why she is her abandoned by her husband. Did she do something wrong? Have a nice evening my friend. love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/20/2020 8:41:00 AM

Oh Deepa , that is so sad. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs .Love, Darlene Enjoy your day.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/19/2020 2:23:00 PM

Hello mam, Women who are brave seek for divorce. Women who are suppressed and tossed up with restrictions doesn't question ,in stead they just sob and die. I am talking from the point of our Indian culture.I believe I answered your question. Enjoy your day.Take care mam:-)much love~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/19/2020 12:35:00 PM

Hello Deepa I have a question to ask.Can she seek a divorce from her husband? Then is another husband found for her? i was just wondering. Enjoy your day my friend. Take care. love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 6/18/2020 4:41:00 AM

Hello mam, Yes It's so painful to see few women suffering abandonment. Especially without any fault of theirs.No she didn't do anything wrong.It's been already written in each of our fate's.What is going to happen will happen. Enjoy your day too:-) Take care .Much love~Deepa.:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 2:10:00 PM

This is a brilliant poem in many aspects Deepa. A heartfelt write, outstanding creativity blended with hope and emotions that feel real and let the reader travel with them.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/18/2020 4:37:00 AM

Hello Aditi mam, Thankyou very much for your uplifting words. Feel so honoured while I read your encouraging words.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa