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Pin by Visual Delights on Masks in 2020 | Gal gadot, Only clothing ...SPOOKTOBER 2019 WRITING CONTEST

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Such love that has imprisoned me to many hells, Neglected nights navigate the pernicious smells… With fiendish fury left flagitious and forsaken, Amidst cold caves of ice the demons have awaken; A virtuous vixen like a deceptive desired disciple, An edacious Eve offering her appetizing apple… I am enslaved and entombed upon loves lament, Left to repellently rot within calamitous cement; Relinquished ravaged ruins of my heart remain, Parasitical palpitations penetrate pensive pain… Derelict desertions devour the longing light, Empty echoes decapitate within shunning sight; Where slings and arrows cancerously conjugate, And where stranded silent sorrows accumulate. _________________________________________________________ June.14.2020 Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned Sponsored by~ Dear Heart Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 6/24/2020 7:13:00 PM
WW, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this beautifully penned poem, your skill with words never ceases to amaze me and I love the images and the reading also _Constance
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Date: 6/22/2020 7:59:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your splendid win Wingster :)
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Date: 6/21/2020 12:14:00 PM
^WW^, great write and imagery, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/18/2020 7:01:00 PM
Where slings and arrows cancerously conjugate Stranded silent sorrows accumulate Enough said Abandon Mic drop
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Date: 6/17/2020 9:25:00 AM
Oh oh this exceeds my imagination for sure Wingster. All the poetic devices seem to walk hand in hand with your muse and adorn it with your deepest thoughts. I bow to your outstanding poem :)
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Date: 6/15/2020 12:15:00 AM
Wonderful alliteration.. Good luck in the contest WW..
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