Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Acrostic

Abandon

Agonized by gloomy sky in rainbow archway you’ll find me
Blown by desert wind, in mirage with despondent you I’ll be
Ambling alone in beach you’ll see me in golden sand’s glow
Network of my pearly lattice the waves will make to show
Drifting in the river of despair, the anchorage out of view
On murmuring ripples you’ll hear my heart’s music anew
Never in these dire states of your life I’ll ever abandon you.

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February 23, 2023
Word, Form Chosen : Abandon, Acrostic
Contest : A Forms And Words Challenge
Sponsored by : Sotto Poet

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Linda Alice Fowler March 4, 2023 at 7:20 AM Oh so very sweet Submial. A shining win! Congratulations! :) Subimal Sinha-Roy March 4, 2023 at 9:03 PM Thank you, Linda for your sweet comment.

Paula Goldsmith March 3, 2023 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story. Have a wonderful day............ Subimal Sinha-Roy March 4, 2023 at 9:03 PM Thank you,Paula.

Sotto Poet March 2, 2023 at 10:17 AM Sublimal, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. Blessings. Subimal Sinha-Roy March 3, 2023 at 1:37 AM Thank you for the placement and for your encouraging comments.

John Arthur February 23, 2023 at 5:09 AM Love your descriptive work within the confines of your chosen word, though the second line is a bit confusing though, 'Blown by desert wind with desolate you in mirage I'll be'- Perhaps rather, 'Blown by desert winds, desolate, within a mirage I'll be' or, 'Blown by desert winds, desolating you in a mirage I'll be' or maybe I'm looking too much into your word choice, lol, But otherwise very well written Subimal Sinha-Roy March 3, 2023 at 1:35 AM Thank you, John for your visit and for your constructive comments. The second line bothered me quite a lot. Your suggestion is very well taken. I have replaced 'desolate' and rearranged the words. I really appreciate your interest in the poem. Thanks, once again.