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A Zen Garden

A circle of small white stones brass wind chimes, one lone, pink-blossomed cherry tree, birds twittering small fountain tinkling - the whole works. I sit, empty my mind, too much tinkling and twittering grow restless, recite a low pitched Buddhist hymn which scares the birds away. The wind picks up chimes tinkle - tinkling becomes annoying, a clanking; Now I can hardly hear myself not-thinking.

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Date: 3/25/2022 11:10:00 AM
Hello Eric, I would love a Zen garden. it sounds so peaceful. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 5/3/2022 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Darlene. Have a good day.
Date: 3/25/2022 7:20:00 AM
I am SO jealous of that "zen garden" you depicted. Can I have one? This was wonderfully written; good job!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 5/3/2022 8:10:00 AM
I would like one also! Cheers.

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