A Zen Garden

A circle of small white stones
brass wind chimes,
one lone, pink-blossomed cherry tree,
birds twittering
small fountain tinkling - the whole works.

I sit, empty my mind,
too much tinkling and twittering
grow restless, recite
a low pitched Buddhist hymn
which scares the birds away.

The wind picks up
chimes tinkle -
tinkling becomes annoying,
a clanking;

Now I can hardly hear myself
not-thinking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Hello Eric, I would love a Zen garden. it sounds so peaceful. Enjoy your day my friend.
Ashford Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Thank you Darlene. Have a good day.
Williams Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 7:20 AM
I am SO jealous of that "zen garden" you depicted. Can I have one? This was wonderfully written; good job!
Ashford Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 8:10 AM
I would like one also! Cheers.
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