A Young Man's Kiss - Retitled

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Originally posted October 02, 2019, under a different title of ambiguous meaning...

She skipped across the rainy day Tucked in her raincoat, a secret lay A young man's kiss had tickled her heart She'd shyly smiled ~ True love's start

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 10/10/2019 11:28:00 AM

Wow!!! How romantic !!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2019 2:36:00 PM

With just three enthusiasm-filled words, you have made my afternoon, Swetha. Thank you so much! Warm wishes, Gershon

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/10/2019 5:26:00 AM

lovely written; I enjoyed

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/10/2019 2:35:00 PM

Appreciate your support for this poem about a kiss, Mahtab. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/8/2019 9:34:00 PM

That first line so intriguing, all of it heartwarming!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/9/2019 9:10:00 PM

Aw, thanks for your heartfelt words, Michelle. Cheers, Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/8/2019 12:50:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, I am so glad that she found love. Have a nce day my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/8/2019 1:32:00 PM

Thank you again and again for your kind words, Darlene. Take care, Gershon