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a young man

a young man took his lit' son to the lake said "don't go near the water for my sake" the ground soon bid a farewell into the water he fell now the youngling is fully wide awake

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Date: 4/9/2025 2:20:00 PM
Good one! Xo
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:28:00 PM
I am glad you wrote a limerick because they are short and easy to read. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 4/9/2025 12:40:00 AM
thanks, it was based on a true story. My son really did fall into a lake and now I tell his son about it.

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