A Young Boy's Easter (Re-Post)

In a black morning, hollowed
   with eggshell delicacy....not fragile, simply gentle
      with dark chocolate skies
         a pajamaed, sleepy ten year old 
           with a six year old's excitement..
             up at five a.m....with his basket ready
                to search out candy eggs

A dew kissed morning, the blossom of an Easter sunrise
    which rises to greet a family....a father, a mother, a brother, a sister
        a house blessed with a spirit of His presence
           so richly apparent, in polished shoes, combed hair, Sunday dress

               In hard boiled colored eggs, chocolate rabbits, jelly beans..
                   baked ham, scalloped potatoes, fruit salad, homemade shortcake
                      assorted aunts, uncles, cousins, grandparents...

                          Being allowed to eat his candy
                             providing he ate
                                 at least
                                    one piece
                                        of broccoli.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/1/2010 10:27:00 AM
Magnificent poem Carrie. You have made my day with this masterpiece. Thank you. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:14:00 AM
Cute and nicely written, Carrie! Reminds me of my youth but I was always good for eating nearly everything even when my older cousin feeded me with his spinach (and I still like spinach!). Hope you'll be having a good Easter-time and thanks for your comments...Gert
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:29:00 AM
Easter greetings Carrie thank you for your welcome comments & valued kind words today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:18:00 PM
How sweet this poem is...brought me such memories..At home we had the tradition to wait till midnight.. then open the Easter Egg..and Maltese Figolli...lovely sugary poem..Charma:)
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:08:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem in artistic structure
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Date: 3/31/2010 5:12:00 PM
lovely layout! peaceful Easter tribute to your sweet family! Carrie! I remember the time, years ago, Dad was in the hospital at Easter, so we brought him baskets! my youngest (now 19!) had on a puffy sweet Easter Dress with a bonnet tilted on her 3yr. old head..dribbling licorice juice down the front as we walked down the hospital corridor to Pop! we got a picture! thx for the memories! jamesy
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Date: 3/31/2010 3:39:00 PM
A nostalgic read for me Carrie.. I remember when my four sons did the very same and they had to eat all their "real food" as they called it before treats... miss those days much.. and your creative write has brought it back..thankxxx..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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