A Years Passing

                            Time has passed so painfully fast,
                            one can hardly believe the time
                            as your flag flies at half mast
                            the church bells cry their chime.

                            We,darling father, cried for you-
                            our loss could not be measured
                            through pain that just grew and grew
                            our unfading memories treasured.

                            A years passing and on we grieve
                            whilst autumn is due to appear
                            and with every lost fallen leave
                            remembrance shall keep you near.
   
                            Beside us with each new day borne-
                            in our hearts forever you will stay.
                            Time is no healer as we mourn
                            and lay for you a silent bouquet.

                            And though they will fall our tears
                            since you laid down for endless rest
                            there is joy for those precious years
                            for we were all so truly blessed.
       
                            Time has passed so painfully fast,
                            one can hardly believe the time
                            as your flag flies at half mast 
                            the church bells cry their chime.

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Date: 4/17/2024 8:01:00 PM
Oh, dear Christina x there are no words really. I went through similar loss in the past months and although I miss Dad (and mum who I lost 2 years ago too) I celebrate their legacy of love and have discovered so much about them in their absence. Hugs. Sam x
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Christina Bowring
Date: 4/17/2024 10:21:00 PM
Dear Sam, heartfelt thanks to you for reading the hardest poem and one of which I wished I didn’t have to write. Your comments are beautiful and I know we both share a great loss in our hearts and both our poems that we have written in their honour will always remind us of how much they were truly loved, will always be loved and shall always be missed. God bless them with a heart full of gratitude for all those precious years. Hugs to you too x
Date: 1/13/2024 5:43:00 PM
Over 28 years ago my Mum and Dad Passed away. I love them dearly and to this day, I miss them, but I still haven't cried. I just have the feeling that they didn't want me to. Your poem is striking Christina, a noble tribute to your father. Best wishes.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 1/14/2024 11:38:00 PM
Dear SV, I am so sorry to hear that you lost your parents so long ago and my heart goes out to you dear one. Our precious loved ones are with us daily with the priceless gift of memory as we continue along life’s path - but oh! how it hurts ! Big hugs to you xx
Date: 9/2/2023 4:45:00 AM
It doesn't matter how fast the years pass, they are always alive in our mind and heart. Such a lovely poem for our beloved ones, that unfortunaly left us. Well done, Christina.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 9/2/2023 12:52:00 PM
My thanks once again Maria for your visit. This poem means a lot to me but one I wish with all my heart I never had to write. Blessings to you.
Date: 8/27/2023 6:00:00 PM
They are always with us, watching over us. Grief never leaves us, it becomes more manageable after a time, for some longer periods are required. Losing a father (and a mother) tears at the heartstrings for those who had strong bonds and Love, given and received. Also, for those whose absence during their time in this world with those left here, their acquaintance, friendship and love fervently sought but never realised. A beautiful tribute to your much loved father, who is always close by you.
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Date: 8/25/2023 7:04:00 PM
Your poem of tribute, Christina, speaks volumes, meaningfully, to all of us who've lost loved ones. Thank you for this posting. Brian
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Christina Bowring
Date: 8/29/2023 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Brian for your lovely, kind comments. It means a lot. Blessings to you.
Date: 8/2/2023 5:04:00 PM
Oh my Christina. What a beautiful and soulful tribute your father. :)
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Date: 7/29/2023 2:39:00 PM
Nice Quatrain poem, Christina. Repeating the last two lines in the first and last verses was a good way of emphasizing the summary of the poem. Dealing with loss and grief can linger when we lose someone meaningful in our lives. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Christina Bowring
Date: 8/1/2023 3:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading the poem and the lovely encouraging comments.Very much appreciated. Blessings to you.
Date: 7/25/2023 2:05:00 AM
Death of a loved one can truly be devastating, Christina, great tribute to your father:)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 7/29/2023 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Joanna for your kind comments.Very much appreciated. Warmest wishes.
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