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A Writer's Two-Way Mirror

A writer’s two-way mirror

Unseen, I watched the live actor.
My eyes followed every gesture.
Speckled realities captured
My senses re-manufactured. 
Next time I will remain a mere spectator.  

hija de la luna
reflections of a florette
9/8/14

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Date: 9/19/2014 2:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and unique work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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hija de la luna
Date: 9/19/2014 8:56:00 PM
thanks, Sara!
Date: 9/8/2014 7:27:00 PM
Oh wow. This piece is inspired. Brilliant. Thank you.
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hija de la luna
Date: 9/9/2014 12:17:00 AM
thanks for the "wow", Maurice!
Date: 9/7/2014 12:52:00 PM
Amazing write Hija...love it ...hugs Tim
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hija de la luna
Date: 9/8/2014 3:17:00 AM
Thanks for loving it, Tim! hugs
Date: 9/7/2014 12:01:00 PM
a rich poetic experience full of shades and nuances. "Two way mirror" is an impressive metaphor of poet's vision and re-vision - induced or intended. Deeply philosophical- Loved it. A major poem. Hugs! __________RAJAT
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Date: 9/8/2014 3:16:00 AM
Thank you, Rajat! was inspired as I was looking at a two-way mirror inside a psych laboratory :)) Thanks for the beautiful words you left on here! hugs