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A Writer's Two-Way Mirror

A writer’s two-way mirror Unseen, I watched the live actor. My eyes followed every gesture. Speckled realities captured My senses re-manufactured. Next time I will remain a mere spectator. hija de la luna reflections of a florette 9/8/14

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2014 2:51:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative and unique work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/19/2014 8:56:00 PM

thanks, Sara!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/8/2014 7:27:00 PM

Oh wow. This piece is inspired. Brilliant. Thank you.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/9/2014 12:17:00 AM

thanks for the "wow", Maurice!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/7/2014 12:52:00 PM

Amazing write Hija...love it ...hugs Tim

Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/8/2014 3:17:00 AM

Thanks for loving it, Tim! hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/7/2014 12:01:00 PM

a rich poetic experience full of shades and nuances. "Two way mirror" is an impressive metaphor of poet's vision and re-vision - induced or intended. Deeply philosophical- Loved it. A major poem. Hugs! __________RAJAT

Hija De La Luna
Date: 9/8/2014 3:16:00 AM

Thank you, Rajat! was inspired as I was looking at a two-way mirror inside a psych laboratory :)) Thanks for the beautiful words you left on here! hugs