A World of Prison

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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc… this poem is about time is a thoroughly galaxy. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

the universe is a earthly prison the universe is a earthly world the universe is a earthly world of prison time is earth's worldly of prison time is earth timely prison time is earth timely universe time is earth earthly prison an existing earth is an existing universe an existing earth is an existing prison exist is exist of earth exist is exist of prison the existence of a universe is the existence of prison the existence of a universe is the existence of earth existence is existence of a universe earth’s galaxy is earth’s prison of galaxy earth galaxy is earth existing galaxy prison of galaxy is prison of earth time is a timely prison time is a timely galaxy time is a timely universe time is a earthly universe

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Sand Blown

Date: 11/11/2018 3:51:00 PM

this is conversation not argument: time then, as persistence of prison or a concept of such, reflects an accep-tance of an idea as the reality...but, time as a prison speaks of two infinite paths, one toward zero and the toward infinity (both endless lists of possi- bilities open during this lifetime)

Lucifer Very Very Very 1st
Date: 12/22/2018 2:29:00 PM

thank you for the time of day for your review,sand blown! sorry for the late reply but all this time i didn’t know you had given me a review until now. again thank you for the review. poet,lucifer very very very 1st