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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc… this poem is about time is a thoroughly galaxy. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.  

A World of Prison

the universe is a earthly prison
the universe is a earthly world
the universe is a earthly world of prison
time is earth's worldly of prison
time is earth timely prison
time is earth timely universe
time is earth earthly prison
	
an existing earth is an existing universe
an existing earth is an existing prison
exist is exist of earth
exist is exist of prison
the existence of a universe is the existence of prison
the existence of a universe is the existence of earth 
existence is existence of a universe 

earth’s galaxy is earth’s prison of galaxy
earth galaxy is earth existing galaxy
prison of galaxy is prison of earth
time is a timely prison
time is a timely galaxy
time is a timely universe
time is a earthly universe
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November 11, 2018 at 3:51 PM
this is conversation not argument: time then, as persistence of prison or a concept of such, reflects an accep-tance of an idea as the reality...but, time as a prison speaks of two infinite paths, one toward zero and the toward infinity (both endless lists of possi- bilities open during this lifetime)
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December 22, 2018 at 2:29 PM
thank you for the time of day for your review,sand blown! sorry for the late reply but all this time i didn’t know you had given me a review until now. again thank you for the review. poet,lucifer very very very 1st
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