A Wisp of Mind

i recollect thoughts like shells
as i walk along
on the shores of time
alone 

memories tumble
like waves at dawn
in remembrance of you

i feel the mist of salty spray
as it it runs down cheeks
like tears of yesteryears
now gone by

i hear the wisp of wind
fall like whispers
of words
unspoken

the pounding waves
in rhythm with my heart
as my feet sink
within the sand
and i stand
alone
in my thoughts

memories dissipating 
beyond the fog
as the sun peaks
above it all

August 18, 2021
Writing Prompt, Oceans or Seas - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by  Constance La France

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Date: 9/23/2023 7:16:00 PM
This is lovely I see you placed, congratulations! Great!
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Date: 8/27/2021 3:56:00 PM
beautiful sadness
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Date: 8/27/2021 6:25:00 AM
Sandra, wonderful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Oceans and Seas ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 8/25/2021 12:44:00 PM
Love this!
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Date: 8/20/2021 1:10:00 PM
How poignant of the memories that beaches can bring, and love the glimmer of hope at the end, this should be a top winner~
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Date: 8/20/2021 10:22:00 AM
Your poems have a enigmatic flair that is truly rare. So, gentle wispy and creatively alluring. Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/19/2021 1:34:00 AM
Pity my poems are not as beautiful as your. I can feel the emotion in this poem and admire the imagery. Well written. Hugs.
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Date: 8/18/2021 2:30:00 PM
I hear the poignance of thoughts walking along shores of time. Sad and emotive in memories. Brilliantly executed, as always, Sandy.
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Date: 8/18/2021 2:06:00 PM
This is beautiful, Sandy. I love it. Such gentle whispers trickling through the heart who listens to your vision. Enchanting. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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