A Wishing Well Love

A wishing well love
By Steven Cooke

I sit here all alone
The snow melting on my face,
A falling leaf sheds a memory,
Of my first love.

It was here, that barmy night
She tripped in fun, amongst the leaves.
She breathed a smile,
Took my hand,
And softly seduced me with a kiss.
A secret wish comes true.

We made love that summer evening,
By the river, under the willow.
.Watched by a lover’s moon,
Hidden from View.

Stared at the stars with our wishing well,
We dreamed of love and silly things,
Two hearts, inhibition to the wind,
Our souls locked in nature’s song.

But Young Love is a precious thing,
And winters do blow cold.
And in the fading light 
She said goodbye.
A last glance, a precocious smile,
And the last moon dance was over

So here I sit with my wishing well
Full of broken dreams,

Yet still, I see embers of a girl 
Who shared love, under the willow
Gave hope to my dreams, 
Touched my heart,
And taught me well about
The wishing well

No tears now, there are dreams to make.
For That wish has flown away
To find another love
To breathe another wish
Into another’s heart.
To unlock more dreams
For her wishing well to pour.

But our union was fruitful
For my wishing well is full
And dreams I can now give
For I seek my real love,
Where ever she may be.
Could it be you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Okay, this is definitely one of my favorites on here!
Kalesh Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 8:41 AM
This is a very emotional. loved it
Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 9:50 AM
You have taken the reader on a most beautiful journey here Steven. So many people will relate to your words in this terrific piece. Thank you for sharing this gem, and many thank for your always kind words :)
Wesley Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Had to come back and read this again. Your verse is so filled with emotion and lovely descriptions. Waiting for the next one!
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August 4, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Steven, u seem to be a hit yourself. A true wishful thinking poem. Much enjoyed, a delight full thought when it comes to love, never giving up but surrendering.. a wish must I say... Love it... Take care,.. Linda
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August 4, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Dear Steven: I really enjoyed this poem. Very well done! Thank-you for reading my poem, In My Dreaming Of You. I'm so very glad that you liked it. Janice
Ball Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 8:38 AM
This is truly lovely and bittersweet. Very well presented with wonderful imagery. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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August 4, 2011 at 7:34 AM
I am really starting to love reading your poetry as it makes me very emotional. I can almost feel what you felt when you wrote it.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:35 AM
steven, what a wonderful free verse this is. Nothing like a poignant story of love!
Smalls Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:44 PM
wow steven, very very nice. my imagination was there all the way through. loved it.
Poet Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Lovely romantic write...enjoyed very much.
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 12:54 AM
the sense of longing sweetens my soul, steve... how gently woven! :) huggs, nette
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August 1, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Well done Steve. It has its own magic. Jim
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August 1, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Well dear poet, if you maintain the humble feelings of love and loss, you should have no problem finding the love you seek ! Great write sir ! Have a wonderful journey....much love, james
Galeyeva Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 9:12 AM
a lovely love story
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:03 PM
super charged romanticism steven.. with crisp words and vibrant images ..feeling the moment and the mood luv..
Wesley Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 7:18 PM
So soft and romantic with the loss expressed with gentleness. A lovely verse on an age old dilemma.
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July 31, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Excellent write mate beautiful verse and I do love love stories...God bless...old Jack
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July 31, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Hello Steven Could it be the "you" is poetry? Thanks Steven for reading my humble poem. I always believe that when dreams die we can also build other ones! Dreams could be in segments, can also be fulfilled in segments. Your poem is finely expressed. I hope you will find that real love. Sometimes it "pops" when you are not looking for one. Dalila
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July 31, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Steven, I agree with Jack. I look back upon loves of my youth with smiles and fond memories. So many poems posted here display anger toward lost loves, but yours is uplifting. Great ending, too -- stay optimistic! Very lovely poem. Love, Carolyn
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July 31, 2011 at 3:41 PM
What a beautiful piece full of tenderness, not bitterness, on lost love
Roberts Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:56 PM
what a beautiful write Steven, I just love this one
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:53 PM
It is better to love and lose than never to love at all.
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