Barbara Gorelick Poet Pantoum

A Wish To Fly

A childish whim, yet still I wish that I could fly
Above the clouds and through the Milky Way
For just one day to lift my soul into the sky
And there among the gilded moonbeams play

Above the clouds and through the Milky Way
To drift and dream and perhaps see heaven’s gates
And there among the gilded moonbeams play
In the music of the spheres my heart awaits

To drift and dream and perhaps see heaven’s gates
For just one day to lift my soul into the sky
In the music of the spheres my heart awaits 
A childish whim, yet still I wish that I could fly…


3/20/16

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Teddy Kimathi April 13, 2016 at 8:31 AM Greetings Barbara. Congrats for your WIN with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)

Timothy Hicks April 7, 2016 at 8:30 PM Delightful and spontaneous, Barbara. The music of the spheres is lovely sound for the ears. Never lose that like childlike wonder. Congrats on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong April 7, 2016 at 1:34 PM Excellent Barbara! Congratulations on your first place most deserving win! #7. ; )

Vladislav Raven April 7, 2016 at 9:35 AM Hi Barbara, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read. A Dream of a read. Your words surely do fly, a seven from me....Mike.

Folajin Ademola April 7, 2016 at 6:41 AM Great poem! I love it...and congrats.

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 9:53 PM Barbara, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~

Rob Carmack April 5, 2016 at 8:10 PM I really like this Barbara and a new form for me to discover. Congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick April 5, 2016 at 4:16 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Joanna Daniel April 5, 2016 at 7:58 AM Great wish wonderfully rewarded:} back to congratulate you on your awesome win:}

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 5, 2016 at 4:51 AM Great work Barbara.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!

Charlie Smith April 4, 2016 at 8:24 PM Wonderful poem, deserving win. Congratulations Barbara...

Eve Roper April 4, 2016 at 7:38 PM Love your poem, Barbara, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison April 4, 2016 at 4:37 PM Dropping back with my congrats on your win Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior March 22, 2016 at 2:03 PM A heavenly pantoum Barbara...inspired by Angels...god bless...(:^WW^:)

Joanna Daniel March 22, 2016 at 10:53 AM What a lovely wish:)I can relate:}a tough form but a poem well written, i like the flow of the words:}I'm sure our wish will come true when we'll fly up to meet our Lord Jesus Christ in the sky:}

Jan Allison March 21, 2016 at 4:35 PM I think many of us dream we can fly Barbara - delightful imagery and flow in this challenging form:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lewis Nyaga March 20, 2016 at 10:04 PM Lovely piece Barbara.. well written.. ;-) Barbara Gorelick March 21, 2016 at 11:32 AM Good of you to stop by Lewis...I like this form ..even though I find it a bit confusing sometimes. BArbara