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A Wish For Fish and a Dolphins Swish

A WISH FOR ALL FISH Washed up on shores around the world Already dead, a whale, a dolphin a shark, All marine life is suffering, the situation Has become absurd, The facts real and stark! My Fairy God mother in my poem Yes about a dress, said I could contact Her anytime, so I made a wish, For 24 hours I wanted to be a fish! She appeared, and made my wish come true, I’m sure no one has this privilege, I’m amongst the very few. But she turned me into a dolphin, Where would I find this clever mammal Especially as I was lost in swift currents, and a narrow channel? So off I swam to find, My own kind! I could understand Dolphin’s communication, This was a brilliant revelation! A protective mummy dolphin and her baby girl, Swam a meter or so ahead of me, hey wait For me I yelled, They heard! I think I spoke with a human accent, They could detect my human scent! But they seemed to accept me, Follow us, we'll show you what you want to see! We all dipped and dived for quite some time As the undulating sea played with us, I squealed and squeaked and made An absolute fuss, Watch out said Delta the mom, swim Far away from that rock, It’s polluted around there with plastic bottles, Dirty bags and a smelly human sock, And keep close to us, don’t follow that current For it meets a filthy river mouth, Which drifts, all the way down South. The plankton and the beautiful plant life below Has been poisoned by an oil rig which is Just around this bend, So make a sharp right here my friend. Dreamy the baby began not feeling well, She had half swallowed a small plastic bag, This for mom raised a red flag, She zipped what was left out of her mouth But alas the baby was turning purple and Was struggling to breathe, I could tell! Do you have a doctor down deep in these seas’, Yes we do, let’s turn around, it’s Doctor Dolphy, As we arrived we noticed a huge queue, A long wait was certainly due, Every fish, dolphin and whale was there Crabs, little sea horses, stone fish Swordfish, sharks, tiger fish, prawns, The doctor was swimming Up and down this long queue, and without much ado, Was giving them all some medicine to swallow, Whilst a sea lion was basking in an enjoyable wallow! Doctor Dolphy looked like our house doctor, Doctor Turner, an elderly chap, jolly, overweight, And incredibly kind – his spectacles kept tipping Off his slippery nose, How he had got them on in the first place Who knows! Dreamy swallowed her medicine and back We went, the time was passing, I’d tucked My cell phone beneath my fin, quite a contortionist, As my dorsal fin was on my back, And I was already carrying a bag-pack! I had 12 hours left. I have a petition You all have to sign, each and every Marine creature, I would like them to feature, In this important literature! That’s why I’m here on this important mission, So that you don’t all become squish That is washed up on some foreign shore And become mere trash because humans Throw their rubbish in your blue zone, I tried phoning, but no one answered the phone! I came to see these true dirty facts for myself About Ocean pollution, responsible For drowning and destroying All life in the sea, pollution generated is vast, Carbon emissions and plastics are choking Fish, Mammals and plants in the sea, This is clear to everyone including you and me. Day by day the situation is worsening, As our oceans are become acidified Until they become totally degraded Which will affect the world, oceans govern Our weather, they are home to beauty And absolute necessity, we must make sure Our blue Planet survives! I’ll be back for the signed petition next week Towards this conclusion I’ll continually strive! My dear friend, Be brave, this is the beginning, not the end!

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Date: 4/5/2020 9:07:00 AM
HI, Jennifer, another creative, excellent write from your pen. It is sad to see the state of our oceans at the moment. What we do to our world beggars belief. As always, from beginning to end your piece held great interest within its lines. If I lived in the sea, I would be a dolphin or an octopus, I am always juggling so many different things. Love the content, Jennifer. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/7/2020 3:05:00 AM
Hi Mike I would definately want to be a dolphin and flip and dive in the undulating frothy waves - they are such beautiful intelligent creatures. Thank-you for an awesome comment Mike, Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 3/1/2020 6:44:00 PM
Highly creative write; tucked your "cell phone under your fin"...how on earth did you swim? Enjoyed.
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Date: 3/4/2020 1:06:00 PM
A bit of a contortionist I guess - poetic licence, oh the joy of poetry! Glad you enjoyed MLK Blessisngs and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/28/2020 11:47:00 AM
Very imaginative and fun creative storytelling on a very serious situation. By the way, dolphin is no fish. It is one of the brightest of mammals. If I had a similar wish, like you, I'd wish to be with dolphins.
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Date: 2/28/2020 1:45:00 PM
You are so right! I forgot to mention the most important part of my poem, thanks Andrea, you are a star! A lovely comment. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/27/2020 4:29:00 PM
Also and too - I love your new picture, new to me anyway. CayCay
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend, xxxx.
Date: 2/27/2020 4:28:00 PM
How very creative you are to deliver a sad, hard truth in the manner you did. Sad indeed and creative indeed but I've come to expect that from your pen. Litter is such a big problem, just not doing that would make such a big difference yet people complain about global warming while throwing plastic to the ground. YIKES. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:52:00 AM
It is a worldwide problem CayCay on Land as well as in our oceans. We are slowly killing ourselves or else due to the dirt and pollution around, we will have some drastic disease that will break out and eliminate three quarters of our population,. Thank-you for an awesome comment Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/25/2020 10:54:00 AM
Wow!! I have often dreamed I'm a fish -- a grouper -- and I'm always warning other fish not to bite fishermen's hooks. I love the way you related this clever story as you revealed the state of our oceans, Jennifer. Species disappear each day. This is a huge favorite for me!! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:03:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, What a wonderful comment - I absolutely love it, and your wanting to become a fish is so great, because we can combine forces , and travel the oceans, to promote healthier living and to stop this mass net catching of fish also. Hugs and love my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/21/2020 7:50:00 AM
A great message, Jennifer. So sad it is every bit true. This one should be written in every language, even so, it wouldn't stop the bad doer's. Love & Blessings. Charlie
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Date: 2/29/2020 6:59:00 AM
You are right, I have seen people on the highway throwing out coke tins and old take out boxes. It is really becoming bad, and no matter how much the few are careful, the many will one day cause some serious world wide epidemic! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/15/2020 12:36:00 PM
Jennifer, So glad your Fairy God mother turned you into a dolphin. Douglas Adams would approve, surely. Such an important warning for the condition of our little planet and the creatures that inhabit it. The diversity of fish, and amphibians, and mammals and insects are so important to Earth's fragile ecosystem. -Richard
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:45:00 AM
I guess he would with his avid interest in the environment. Our land mass through out Planet Earth is just as polluted, even space has it's fair share of debris lying around. Thank you for your lovely comment Richard. Blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2020 10:36:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … not often do we read a verse from a marine creatures point of view, and yours sadly should shock us into disbelief on how humanity is treating the seas and oceans as rubbish dumps. It truly is a disgrace - thanks again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 2/16/2020 8:56:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, Absolutely a disgrace and scary, for what will eventually happen to our seaside holidays. Glad you enjoyed me being a dolphin! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2020 2:50:00 PM
A very insightful write, Jenn. It kept me rapt to the end! Many thanks for your kind comments on a couple of my recent concoctions. Best to you - Bob
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Date: 2/16/2020 8:54:00 AM
Hi Robert, thank-you for your welcome visit and so glad you enjoyed my poem. great pleasure reading your poems. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/11/2020 12:04:00 PM
I loved your clever poem to bring awareness to this terrible human plight that endangers our oceans. I just signed a petition yesterday to keep our drinking water pure here in Hawaii. This is beautifully expressed Jennifer. Bravo! xxoo
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:22:00 PM
Drinking water will become a huge issue in 15- 20 years from now Connie. I have done a alot of research about this disastrous problem coming our way -people will kill one another for it. The world is over populated and there just won't be enough to go around. As for our oceans , perhaps parents will read fairy stories to their children of what a seaside holidays used to be like! Thank-you for a wonderful comment Connie. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/11/2020 5:09:00 AM
A wonderful message here...not to mention imagination...
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:13:00 PM
Hi Arturo, thank you a lovely comment - there should be a concentrated effort by each country, a commitment by governments of the world, but man is too greedy, to the point of destroying mother earth! Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/11/2020 3:20:00 AM
You captivate with your imaginative narrative in free verse, Jenny. Using fiction you speak of reality, highlighting the dire environmental problems which we are facing. I agree that it's not the end, but only if quick and proper action is taken. ~ Warm regards & Blessings, my friend. // paul
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:08:00 PM
Drinking water will soon become as huge a problem as our polluted oceans - it is so sad, too little is being done, and perhaps it is already too late to save our blue planet! Thank-you Paul for an awesome comment, warm regards and hugs my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2020 6:27:00 PM
you tell such wonderful stories in your poetry and this one has a important message within... so sad all the pollution that ends up in the seas...it irks me to walk on the beach and see plastic bottles scattered about, especially when there are so many trashcans for people to use... great write Jennifer... hugs and blessings my friend :)
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Sandy, our whole Planet is littered , it started with all the trash thrown about on land worldwide, and has now reached our oceans threatening all life in the sea, and ultimately all of us on earth. Thank-you for a brilliant comment dear friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2020 4:04:00 PM
Nicely done, great personification an action that needs attention. Thank your for congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:59:00 PM
Hi Eve, I loved your POTD, your are a poetess of note on soup my dear friend. I wanted to become a fish so that I could convey the disasters under the surface of our oceans first hand. Blessings, Eve, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2020 2:25:00 PM
Dear Jenny, you have a very unique way in letting your avid reader soar with your imagination to a "blue planet" with the "scent of human"! You convey your meaningful messages in a so beautiful fairy story! Only a poetess, as you are, of a great talent and an artistic flair for storytelling enables us to embark on a wondrous journey of different mysterious realms! You amaze with your masterful pen, soul sister! An immense pleasure to read your poetry! Warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:54:00 PM
Besma I feel truly humbled by your loving and warm comment, I don't know if I deserve all you the wonderful things you say to me but you always make me feel proud, proud to have you as a friend, a soul sister and a fellow poetess whose rich poetry I could never deign to reach. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2020 11:40:00 AM
Your poems always go beyond ordinary themes--a great public service to highlight the problems created by humans--a creative way to send a message--a story well told, Jennifer. Hope people will heed your warning.
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:50:00 PM
Oceans will be come so acidified with all the rubbish from humans, rivers and oil rigs (the last two also due to careless humans), that holidays by the sea will become a thing of the past. Thank your for a terrific comment, I always look forward to them. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2020 7:21:00 AM
Great story, Jennifer. this world is filled with pollution...and polluted people. Awesome write! Hugs x
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Date: 2/11/2020 11:59:00 AM
So right you are Charles - it is polluted people that pollute our planet - disgusting and disrespectful, there should be heavy fines if the y are caught. Blessings my friend, thank you for such a relevant comment. Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 3:48:00 PM
What a wonderful and meaningful story you told, Jennifer! (Similar in meaning to one I wrote in college.) Personification carries the story very well and the reader has sympathy for the sea life being strangled by our thoughtless pollution. Excellent and definitely a Big Fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Carolyn - a wonderful comment and very proud that you faved this poem, we all have history which bonds us to our past, and just sometimes it is great to reminisce and pen ones thoughts down. Blessings dear friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 2:59:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, You are such a great story teller. Just like the land is suffering from pollution , the ocean is too. We need to take better care of our planet. Well done my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/11/2020 11:47:00 AM
Hi Alexis, we won't even be able to dip our little toe in the sea if it carries on like this - human beings are self destructive, this planet is heading for extinction I would predict, not to mention that it also only takes one madman to press a button to and set the atom bomb off, and there will have to be retaliation - very scary how long Planet Earth will last! Love and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 2:39:00 PM
You tell this so well Jennifer, indeed much more needs to be done to rid us of all this plastic being caught up on our shoreline.keep spilling the ink! Hope all well with you, Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 2/11/2020 11:41:00 AM
Hi Gordon, It is becoming a real catastrophe, and if countries don't do something about this desperate problem, seaside holidays will become fairy stories to read to children. Blessing my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 1:04:00 PM
- A dangerous life for those who have their homes in the sea ... more than 8 million tons of plastic probably end up in the sea every year ... a scary picture - A wonderful poem, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thank-you my dear friend - I am concerned that our oceans are not going to be approachable if the powers that be do not get involved. Blessings dear soul sister and hugs, Jenny.
Date: 2/9/2020 12:21:00 PM
A great message In your story Jennifer, things are being done but not enough and everyone needs to be on board. Tom
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Date: 2/9/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thank-you Tom, things are getting really scary from every perspective in life. Where will it all lead us to? Thank you for a lovely comment. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 11:42:00 AM
Hello Jennifer Proxenos, well told with lots of facts everyone should know.have a nce day my friend. x Darlene
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Date: 2/9/2020 11:45:00 AM
Darlene, how lovely to have you visit and thank you for a great comment, We must take notice as our oceans are in jeopardy! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 10:55:00 AM
You are a great story teller...You have a vivid imagination and that helps.. you should write a book!
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Date: 2/9/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thank-you for an awesome comment Silent One - you are an exceptional poet, and I value your comments enormously. I probably will one day. Blessings, Jennifer.

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