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A Wish Come True

A WISH COME TRUE The essence of the life is nothing but heaven It isn’t mere heaven but feels to be hell even Because there are many ups and downs We may have to trounce all these for crowns! In the lifecycle, somebody comes, somebody goes, Somebody stays in our heart laying the basement at the bottom With whom we share our glees and woes, They may live in us and console us from the fathom. Their happiness becomes our happiness Their sadness be, of course, our sadness! This life always seems like a journey of bus, Where people may get into and halt! Strangers come and sit beside us But we never value them which is our fault, If we spend a little time to know about them, And when they halt in their stop We realize them as the gem! When those strangers become closer, How long be the journey, it doesn’t bother! We find our way less as a traveler, Hence, I wish them to be a full time traveler, Till my destiny! It doesn’t put out me Wherever they board, but to be with me! Let my wish come true Like the existence of universe is true!

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Elaine George

Date: 10/28/2016 4:37:00 PM

Many words of wisdom in this profound, poem, Angad. Lainey

Aishwarya Vr

Date: 6/15/2016 1:44:00 AM

let your wish come true soon...and its awesome

Angad Ps
Date: 6/15/2016 12:27:00 PM

Thank you, Aishwarya..! let it...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/11/2016 6:22:00 PM

Welcome to the soup and congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 5/31/2016 11:20:00 PM

Angad,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Angad Ps
Date: 6/1/2016 6:23:00 AM

Hello, I am entirely new to peotrysoup,and i am very much delighted to be encouraged a lot on my very first attempt on the soup. I am also happy to get a poetic friend like you. thanks for your best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2016 2:10:00 AM

Angad,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Angad Ps
Date: 5/31/2016 6:58:00 AM

Linda, Thank you very much for the encouragement on the very first ever post of mine, as a new poet, i am really surprised and glad to get to encouragement from experienced poet like you.. i am really lucky to be here..

Karam Misra

Date: 5/31/2016 1:21:00 AM

Welcome on board, Angad. Y^ou have made a very good beginning by posting a very fine first poem. PS offers great resources to learn more about poetry and its forms, and is a great source of inspiration to write. Do take a look at the Contests page - it provides great ideas and encourages one to try new forms and styles. You may like to relook at the "Blitz" form you have chosen. You can get good examples by searching for this in the search engine of PS. Good luck and keep writing. ~karam~

Lewis Raynes

Date: 5/31/2016 12:15:00 AM

Great write Angad, welcome to the soup, here ur words last for longer than the people in this write. your poetic friend, Lewis

Angad Ps
Date: 6/14/2016 4:29:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear friend. Really glad to have such a warm welcoming words..!

Angad Ps
Date: 6/14/2016 12:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear friend. Really glad to have such a warm welcoming words..!

Moon Flower

Date: 5/31/2016 12:11:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Angad. :) By the way, you may want to visit my list of poems on my profile, there you can see also the Blitz form.