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Urban Sonnet

Invented by: Laura Loo. Sonnet form, with 10 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of: ABABBB- CDCDDD- EFEFFF-GG

A December sun sends splendiferous rays to illuminate Dawn's Halo of light. And its bright beams polish the dullest days, dissolving darkness imposed by the night. Shadows cannot appease Sol's appetite, and He rises to consume night; outright. Ice crystals sparkle, and snowflakes glisten as sunlight puts Winter's white on display. And Dawn's silence compels you to listen for the faintest sounds that waken the day. Winter flurries convince children to play inside with snowmen of paper-mâché. Icicles hang from the eves and the trees, and the air feels frigid, fresh, crisp, and clean. You can walk on water when rivers freeze; while white overshadows everything green. The sun sparkles like a yellow citrine imbuing the scene with a golden sheen. Nature designed this Winter Wonderland, and like Spring, Summer, and Fall; it is grand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/4/2018 2:44:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Emile. I copied down some of my favorite words, and said this will have to go to my FAV list now, so it did.
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Date: 12/4/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I apricate all of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/3/2018 10:31:00 AM
Great imagery, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 12/3/2018 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/3/2018 10:10:00 AM
Such a great description of a "winter wonderland"! Your talent shines once again with this poem, Emile.
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Date: 12/3/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your support and encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/3/2018 10:08:00 AM
A well written poem indeed...Enjoyed the read...All the best Emile
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