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naked trees shiver as snow flurries swirl about - a snowman keeps watch 1/16/22 P.S. syllable counter For Tania Kitchen's Winter Haiku contest

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Date: 1/20/2022 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations Kim, "naked trees shiver' I love it. Terry.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/21/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 1/19/2022 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Do "naked trees shiver"??? I really enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day..............
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/21/2022 9:28:00 AM
When wind blows through the leafless branches it looks like shivering to me. Thank you for your comment, Paula!
Date: 1/18/2022 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations, wintery delight! Cheers! M.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Margarita!
Date: 1/18/2022 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations, Kim, on your lovely win! "snow flurries swirl about -" a wonderful winter image! Love ~ Mala
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Mala!
Date: 1/18/2022 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I love the image of the snowman keeping watch! :) Paulette
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 1/18/2022 2:16:00 AM
congrats on your win!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 1/17/2022 9:39:00 PM
A very beautiful haiku with a very high imagery. Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 1/17/2022 7:18:00 PM
What a wonderful scene you created with your outstanding haiku, Kim! Congrats on your win! :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 1/17/2022 4:52:00 PM
That snowman is a valuable sentinel in some places, I am sure. Enjoyed this piece. Beautifully done.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 1/17/2022 2:24:00 PM
A snowman brings joy to young and old alike. I loved your winning haiku Kim. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Connie! Hope you are well.
Date: 1/17/2022 2:02:00 PM
Delightfully original take on the winter wonderland contest. Your seasonal muse was with you in fine form. Be well. Brian
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brian!
Date: 1/17/2022 12:03:00 PM
nice one Kim....beware the watchful eyes of the snowman....well done
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:06:00 AM
Ha ha! Thank you, John!
Date: 1/17/2022 11:57:00 AM
As they always do! Congratulations!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 1/17/2022 11:48:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a lovely picture of winter, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 1/17/2022 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kim! Wonderful to have you back on the soup. Your sensory words gave me a winter "shiver!" Nicely done. Sending you blessings for the new year.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Sam! It's good to be back but I probably won't be very active the next couple months as I have to take care of my step mom's estate.
Date: 1/17/2022 8:56:00 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis!
Date: 1/17/2022 8:46:00 AM
This gives the reader a peek at a Norman Rockwell winter scene. Sure do miss his pictures. Don't see them often anymore. Beautiful. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/19/2022 6:02:00 AM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 1/17/2022 8:18:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your first placement with your creative poem, loved the last line!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/17/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania! I am honored!
Date: 1/17/2022 7:37:00 AM
Lovely Kim! Debx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/17/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 1/16/2022 1:36:00 PM
Love the image Kim, we've only had frost so far. Hope you're keeping well Tom
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/17/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! I live in Florida so snow is a very rare happening.