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A Winter Haiku

Snow is just a mask 
Regenerating earths face.
A special peeling.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
01.2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/23/2015 12:58:00 AM
Even Mother Nature has her own beauty secrets... Clever work, Brenda! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/20/2015 6:50:00 AM
What great juxtaposition, peeling off earth's mask. Harder when it has turned to ice. Congratulations, Brenda, I enjoyed your haiku.
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Date: 1/19/2015 6:15:00 PM
Beautifully penned haiku, Brenda.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/18/2015 5:11:00 PM
brenda. seeing the last line of this one. I think it also works for Winter's End contest!!! Congrats, sweetie. Where are you? I haven't seen you much lately.
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Date: 1/18/2015 1:23:00 PM
congratulations Brenda on this fine win
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Date: 1/18/2015 9:21:00 AM
Hi Brenda, congratulations on your win for this outstanding Haiku. Your allegory was amazing! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:15:00 AM
Brenda what an imagination.Snow is just a mask . Earth is our mother. Getting her face regenerated.Wonderful perspective.Deserved win. Hugs! ...rajat
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:12:00 PM
Nicely packaged,congrats on the win Brenda...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful picture drawn with words, Brenda, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:25:00 PM
Dropping by with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:19:00 PM
Brenda, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:18:00 PM
ha I love it... PD
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Date: 12/13/2014 3:13:00 AM
A special peeling--wonderful Brenda-a very powerful haiku..a special feeling for me.Hugs! >>>>>>rajat
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:25:00 AM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...A very very nicely written Haiku...A lot of people don't stay true to the Spirit of Haiku. I commend you for that...God Bless, and remain Faithful 1 Love
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:17:00 PM
I like what Andrea said about your poem. And agree! Wow, it is very creative. I love it. You are so talented. That's the best Haiku I've ever read. Yes, a 7 and sav for me, too. May God's healing and love surround you, Brenda.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Darlene
Date: 11/10/2014 1:09:00 PM
So much said in so few words, Brenda. A great thought-provoking Haiku. Fav-7, Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Date: 11/9/2014 11:29:00 PM
ooh, a facial peel for earth!! And what do we see when it is pulled off? the beautiful face of the spring!!! That is how this makes me feel!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 12:56:00 PM
You got it Andrea! Thanks.
Date: 11/9/2014 10:49:00 PM
You've created here a very delightful and surreal picture with this one Brenda. I like the special peeling last line nice twist to it. Love it! A deserved 7 from me and a fav for me...I'm getting quite greedy with my fav list...lol...I think my page is about to burst to the brim with all of them favs... they will start spilling off my page am afraid..lol... :) Have a good week Brenda my dear friend. :) Love and Light! xxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:52:00 PM
Thank you so I Dorian. I am honoured to squeeze on your list. :-).
Date: 11/9/2014 10:16:00 PM
Brenda, Great Haiku here!! I will keep the "special peeling" image in mind when the snow comes later here in Germany. Loved this one!! Alles Gute, Gary
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:51:00 PM
Danke sehr Gary!
Date: 11/9/2014 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful look on winter, I do like this Haiku Brenda, on my favorite list it is "7" :) hugs eve
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 7:08:00 PM
Ah, thanks so much Eve.
Date: 11/9/2014 2:15:00 PM
beautiful haiku, my friend
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Jack.
Date: 11/9/2014 8:10:00 AM
True n perfect on winters is ur haiku Brenda! Great thots.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 4:40:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 11/9/2014 7:22:00 AM
This is awesome Brenda...I love it,,,hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Tim.
Date: 11/9/2014 7:16:00 AM
- A special way to define the snow: "A special peeling" - Well done, Brenda !!! - (I only like snow on Christmas cards :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 4:39:00 PM
My favourite snow is also on Christmas cards but I have no choice. Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 11/9/2014 7:14:00 AM
ooh I love it Brenda so descriptive! Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 4:37:00 PM
Thank you Jan.