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A Winter Haiku

Snow is just a mask 
Regenerating earths face.
A special peeling.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
01.2013

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/23/2015 12:58:00 AM

Even Mother Nature has her own beauty secrets... Clever work, Brenda! Congrats on the win!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/20/2015 6:50:00 AM

What great juxtaposition, peeling off earth's mask. Harder when it has turned to ice. Congratulations, Brenda, I enjoyed your haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2015 5:11:00 PM

brenda. seeing the last line of this one. I think it also works for Winter's End contest!!! Congrats, sweetie. Where are you? I haven't seen you much lately.

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/18/2015 1:23:00 PM

congratulations Brenda on this fine win

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/18/2015 9:21:00 AM

Hi Brenda, congratulations on your win for this outstanding Haiku. Your allegory was amazing! Hugs, Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/18/2015 3:15:00 AM

Brenda what an imagination.Snow is just a mask . Earth is our mother. Getting her face regenerated.Wonderful perspective.Deserved win. Hugs! ...rajat

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/17/2015 10:12:00 PM

Nicely packaged,congrats on the win Brenda...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2015 8:54:00 PM

Beautiful picture drawn with words, Brenda, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2015 7:25:00 PM

Dropping by with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2015 7:19:00 PM

Brenda, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Top Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2015 7:18:00 PM

ha I love it... PD

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 3:13:00 AM

A special peeling--wonderful Brenda-a very powerful haiku..a special feeling for me.Hugs! >>>>>>rajat

Poetiq1der Simmons

Date: 11/28/2014 11:25:00 AM

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...A very very nicely written Haiku...A lot of people don't stay true to the Spirit of Haiku. I commend you for that...God Bless, and remain Faithful 1 Love

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/12/2014 10:17:00 PM

I like what Andrea said about your poem. And agree! Wow, it is very creative. I love it. You are so talented. That's the best Haiku I've ever read. Yes, a 7 and sav for me, too. May God's healing and love surround you, Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Darlene

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/10/2014 1:09:00 PM

So much said in so few words, Brenda. A great thought-provoking Haiku. Fav-7, Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 5:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 11:29:00 PM

ooh, a facial peel for earth!! And what do we see when it is pulled off? the beautiful face of the spring!!! That is how this makes me feel!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 12:56:00 PM

You got it Andrea! Thanks.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/9/2014 10:49:00 PM

You've created here a very delightful and surreal picture with this one Brenda. I like the special peeling last line nice twist to it. Love it! A deserved 7 from me and a fav for me...I'm getting quite greedy with my fav list...lol...I think my page is about to burst to the brim with all of them favs... they will start spilling off my page am afraid..lol... :) Have a good week Brenda my dear friend. :) Love and Light! xxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:52:00 PM

Thank you so I Dorian. I am honoured to squeeze on your list. :-).

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/9/2014 10:16:00 PM

Brenda, Great Haiku here!! I will keep the "special peeling" image in mind when the snow comes later here in Germany. Loved this one!! Alles Gute, Gary

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:51:00 PM

Danke sehr Gary!