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A Winter Haiku

. On a barren tree A Cardinal stops to rest Bleakness flies away ~~~~~ Written: January 1st, 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 1/1/2010 1:18:00 PM
Those Red Cardinals light things up. Keep the creative pen flowing. This is creative and origianl. Sara
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Date: 1/1/2010 10:57:00 AM
Oh, this is just lovely, painting a picture as haiku should well do. Andrea
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Date: 1/1/2010 7:56:00 AM
I know what you mean Laine, when ever a bird rests upon a branch how I long to commune with it, there's always a little bleakness when they up and fly away. This is a wonderful Haiku, so much feeling within your words. Bravo on this one! Happy New Year!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/1/2010 7:44:00 AM
So much truth in your words. I can just see that cardinal brightening up one's day. Thanks for allowing me to smile with this poem. HAPPY NEW YEAR! Karen
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