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A Windy Night

Thunderstorms roared Lightning strikes threatened Dark clouds obscured the moon Stars tried twinkling amidst clouds Then the gentle breeze, turned into a vigorous wind, contorted the lofty coconut trees, shattered the fluffy nimbus clouds Naughty nimbus clouds, then the phony politicians played hide and seek repeatedly unveiled the luminous moon and stars Vigorous wild wind, later the tsunami waves smashed the rainy dreams made us yearn for perpetual rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/13/2017 11:07:00 AM
Captivating writing, lightning of expressions dearest, Supraja!
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Date: 6/12/2017 3:29:00 PM
In a troubled world, wind might be able to blow away problems and worries... rain could wash away negativity. These are the thoughts which your poem brings to mind, Supraja! I like your imagery, personification and metaphorical suggestion. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/11/2017 6:50:00 PM
oh my , comparing the storm to politics. Indeed, my friend, the leaders of the world have brought a sh@#Storm down on us!! Well done.
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Date: 6/11/2017 9:03:00 AM
"Into every life a little rain must fall" Supraja. However, storms which come in darkness can be very scary. Nice write:)
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