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A Windy Edge

It runs low off the moors, when it gets to this blustering brink, it shoves and ropes, it punches eyes. When it sweeps this ledge it bites like a viper, it's voice forged in whirlpools of chaos. My legs tremble in a corkscrew tug of war. Gust-mobed clouds crush molecules of fear. Rain hacks and mauls. This raw wind has me by the throat; now all the non-rooted must sink or float, or be delivered down to the deep dale and a more sheltering sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/12/2019 3:23:00 PM
Cool feedback Richard. I did a lot right in this poem, but in my files, I have made a not that it still needs work. Hopefully, I will return to it one day. Thanks!
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Date: 7/12/2019 8:45:00 AM
You have skills! Wind has never been described so succinctly.
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