A Windy Day

Too heavy the wind is blowing..
All my jewels are flying.

So cold is this night..
And so tenderly I fight.

Trying to stop the flying petals off
From me, else, am half..!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 11:22 AM
A nice little poem, welcome to the poetrysoup, however i m alos new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Jeyabose Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Sure, thanks for your comment. I wrote this about 8 years back with my own pencil drawing of the petals of cherry blossom flying away.. I tried to include the picture from my old diary but was not able to.. hope if poetry soup had that option that would be great to bring out the feelings hidden behind the words of any poem. (think its restricted to premium contributors..) hope they make it available to all..!!
White Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Your Rhyme, or Couplets, it made me smile, and I could see it happen :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Jeyabose Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 11:07 AM
Thank you :)
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