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A Windswept Sea-Bite Size

Mournful tears flow in pale moonlight Loneliness shadows me this dark night I thirst for wings, hunger to take flight on a journey across the windswept sea until dawn or death washes over me October 2, 2021 Bite Size Poem No 22 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/12/2021 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/sad~~story/write. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 10/11/2021 12:09:00 PM
Such a plaintive cry from the broken heart in the night Jenna. A vivid picture of pain. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Date: 10/11/2021 9:39:00 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your placement in Line's contest with these beautiful rhyming lines and I really like your image too ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/4/2021 7:35:00 AM
Very nice, I can feel your pain as if I were right next to you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 7:52:00 AM
There is a bond. Thank you.
Date: 10/3/2021 6:08:00 AM
Jenna, your emotions are powerfully expressed with this piece! I hope the dawn reaches you first!!! Well done!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2021 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for the well wishes, Mike. You're so kind.
Date: 10/2/2021 9:53:00 AM
Your imagery is stunning, Jenna. Enhanced by the picture. Best of luck in Line's contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2021 6:26:00 AM
I appreciate your complimentary thoughts, Milt. Thank you.
Date: 10/2/2021 8:30:00 AM
Quote a sad verse in a few lines Jenna where it seems all hope is gone. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/3/2021 6:26:00 AM
Writing this one made me feel sad. Good thing it was a short one. Thanks, Tom.

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