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A Wilted Rose-Lei

is love to be a wilted rose to fade beneath the winter snows to pierce itself with its own thorn its beauty hide in death to mourn i watch it bloom from tiny seeds a spark of lust from passion bleeds unfold itself within a kiss then fade within the dying bliss December 30, 2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2020 10:14:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Sandra, congratulations your win. Eve

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/17/2020 10:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve... hugs and blessings... :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/16/2020 7:23:00 PM

Hi Sandra? This is so deep and well written. WoW! Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved. Enjoy your evening:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/17/2020 10:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis... good to see you... hope you have a wonderful day! hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2020 5:45:00 PM

Zowie! This is one of your Very Best Sandra! I am Faving this amazing winner! Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 7:00:00 PM

wow, thank you Connie...i am honored by your kind words and the faving of this poem...hugs and blessings XoXo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2020 12:41:00 PM

Poignant, classical 'Lay' -- the tension between current beauty and inevitable fade, making the beauty all the more precious. Congrats, Sandy! Warm wishes, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon... hugs :)

John Watt

Date: 1/16/2020 11:58:00 AM

Sandra, your meter, rhyme, and message are perfection. I love "to pierce itself with its own thorn"; such an apt description of the vulnerability we feel in love. Like a rose, beautiful but intimidating. Well done and congrats ~ John

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 12:08:00 PM

Thank you so much John...i am still learning rhyme and meter, i used to always only write free verse but not sometimes accept challenges to attempt forms... :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/16/2020 7:27:00 AM

Sandra, this is beautiful and it simply just flowed so well. Love this! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:22:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie not only for feeling this one worthy of a win and your kind comments but for hosting these contests, and challenging me to try new forms, and rhymes :) hugs

Curtis Moorman

Date: 1/16/2020 7:26:00 AM

Sandra,, I have long been a lover of roses of every description and written poems about them. Your poem is exquisitely written, hence, the first place win!! Congrats!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Curtis for your kind words... :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/16/2020 7:26:00 AM

Beautifully penned, Sandy, love always blooms again. Congrats on your win. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much John... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/16/2020 7:08:00 AM

Congrats Sandy on your first place finish. This poem was beautiful and a little sad but that rose I am sure will bring smiles back when spring arrives.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 9:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...i remember when i wrote this one and you were delighted with the rhyme within, from this non-rhyming poet... your words and the win made me smile :) hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 1/1/2020 7:29:00 PM

Wonderfully done. Love is born, then dies, and rises again from its own ashes...

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 8:01:00 PM

Thank you so much.... Happy New Year :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/1/2020 5:15:00 PM

I think this is delectable and delightful, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 8:00:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren... hugs :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 1/1/2020 9:11:00 AM

Just beautiful like all of your poems!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Krish... Happy New Year... hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2019 7:59:00 AM

So much beauty, Sandra! A winner for me!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/31/2019 10:45:00 AM

wow thanks Kim...i am touched by your words :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/30/2019 9:06:00 PM

You've laid it on 'very heavy,' as the hippies used to say. Whoa! Charlie's gonna have to hold on tight, for dear life!! :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 9:12:00 PM

lol... well i hope that's a good thing...the first line was haunting my muse all day...i finally gave in and a poem was born... hugs

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/30/2019 8:45:00 PM

I loved it. Short rhyming meaningful.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 9:02:00 PM

Thank you so much John.... Happy New Year :)

Bobby May

Date: 12/30/2019 7:56:00 PM

WOW!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Bobby...Happy New Year to you Bro :) hugs

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/30/2019 6:23:00 PM

Sandra I honestly don't know about these contests, but regardless of a win or a loss; this poem has touched me deeply. I thank you so very much.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 6:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Jeff...to touch one person with words makes a poem a winner to me already :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/30/2019 4:41:00 PM

Beautiful and poignant, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 6:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Line...Happy New Year my friend :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/30/2019 3:50:00 PM

Your poem blossoms beautifully my friend--even in the theme of wilted rose. Lovely flow and rhymes.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 3:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay... the wilted rose line got stuck in my head out of know where and then i gave into my muse and the poem was born in minutes... hugs and Happy New Year to you my friend :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/30/2019 3:32:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful and just curious, aren't you the poet who says she doesn't rhyme very well? Hmmm, obviously must have been someone else. :) Wonderfully written Sandy, I loved everything about this. Best wishes in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 3:34:00 PM

i know... what it up with my muse? perhaps your poetry cast some sort of spell on her... Thank you Chris, you made me laugh and smile with your comment... hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 12/30/2019 3:25:00 PM

This was a lovely piece. A fav. Best for the contest, but I believe you have already won... Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 3:27:00 PM

I am truly honored by your kind words and the fave... this came out of nowhere...i am not sure how well it will do...but it was a fun write... to me to touch you the way it did, it's already a winner to me... hugs :) Thanks for the smiles my friend...