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A Wild Rose

A wild rose was growing along the mountain road so freely, until a young couple came passing by one fine day, so long ago. She stooped down and picked this flower so beautiful to behold. These young dear ones made a vow that day, saying that their love would grow into the beauty of this wild rose, so tender and sweet, a delicate love, toward each other, till the end of time, to cast a beauty like the wild rose had done for them. wrote 10-13-08

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Date: 10/15/2008 6:41:00 PM
This is such a precious poem. It flows with softness and inspiration in spirit. The images reflecting from the poem are inspirational and uplifting. This is what love should be all about and it grows. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/14/2008 6:35:00 PM
So tender and sweet...just like the rose itself. Lovely write, love Kristin
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Date: 10/14/2008 3:28:00 PM
such a romantic and elegant write, so peaceful and serene, love it take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/14/2008 12:31:00 PM
A beautiful love story, James! Connecting their love with the rose, very nicely done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/14/2008 11:51:00 AM
James what a beautiful story of love and a rose. Very clever how you made the rose come alive with them and their love. Excellent write loved it. Blessings Michael
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Date: 10/14/2008 11:37:00 AM
This is beautiful, a great comparison of love to the rose. Descriptive and so flowing a read. Very well done! Michael
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