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A White Rose

It was a night full of stars The moon shined upon the land that was green As the sky was blue The stars moved in the motion of circles And the grass let out a sound as beautiful As a rose itself A rose, a rose, one of white pedals to shine A rose fuller than a swine full of slop Majestic and divine An untouchable rose, one that I could not own A rose whose roots were deeply rooted on a green hill Its throne A rose who’s beauty had been covered and shadowed By a tree’s branches, that rapped around its stem. Its life being chocked and squeezed ‘til life was no more That one white rose was the one I adored I swore that I would free this life from its horrid prison And allow it a life of growth The ability to spread its seeds to gardens across the horizon A life in a vase that I shall own, hold, and cherish Til the day I too become a prisoner of the earth And in a way I already had I trekked up the hill to the place where this rose Lay is roots, but pulling the plant Would do the task not The branches of the tremendous thick hold were to stay as they were The rose pedals began to fall to my feet, and my duties had become clear With my axe, the stem of the rose I cut and in my arms I held tight And with my axe I pierced my heart and I too fell A victim of a hold that could not be broken But though our physical appearance faded into the sky Our bodies both became a part of the rich soil Left to father future generations

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 10:43:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shaquan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 4:37:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your lovely creative piece of poetry tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun as u enjoy a Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:27:00 AM
a beautiful and blissful write,, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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