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11/26/2024 for Pick-A-Title Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

A Whisper in Devil's Ear

An outcry from the populace,
amongst them a diabolic menace,
appealing to their weaker sense,
under every kind of false pretense -
What could they do?

The devil may whisper, or he may purr.
He knows the temptations we prefer.
Yes, that's true, but all the same,
we can beat Lucifer at his game.
Let's set a trap!

"You have cute horns and a tail,
I know some poor suckers, weak and frail.
In the darkness, follow me -
their despair, a glorious sight to see."
Good plan - will it work?

Yep, he plunged, all right,
through a trapdoor, into a cage of light
where folks could now keep an eye
on that unscrupulous, dangerous guy.
He "fell" for it!

Sure, they could intercept him,
but do you think a mere cage kept him?
He's still lurking at large.
We must be vigilant.  Don't put him in charge.
Watch out!
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Alex Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
Crandall Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Thanks, Christuraj!
Ibeh Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:11 PM
David, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write. " He still lurks at large, we must be vigilant" Love this line!
Crandall Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Thanks Edward, great contest as always!
Alex Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 6:51 PM
"We must be vigilant. Don't put him in charge" - a verse of precaution and warning to every one. Beautifully written.
Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:28 PM
Thanks Christuraj!
Rodgers Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Hey David, a nice compelling exploration of temptation showing the vigilance required to confront it. The way you personify the devil and illustrate the struggle against his allure is both engaging and thought-provoking. I was particularly struck by the line: "He knows the temptations we prefer. Yes, that's true, but all the same, we can beat Lucifer at his game." David such a wonderful blending narrative with deeper insights is truly commendable. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Hi Daniel, thanks - I appreciate your comments!
Empress Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 10:14 AM
Powerful message youv passed on here dear david, youv written very well for this prompt in a very intriguing and engaging manner. “ The devil may whisper, or he may purr. He knows the temptations we prefer.” so true! Couldnt have said it any better. And to fight those voices is something we must work on. Always. Pleasure reading your work, hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
Crandall Avatar
November 27, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Thanks Ink. It seems like a have a little part of my brain, call it "the devil", and that part tricks the rest of my brain. The challenge is to see when I'm being tricked by myself...if that makes any sense - lol :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Ooh…so good! Yes! Hugs
Crandall Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Kim :-)
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